|Reviews for Guilt trip|
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/7
That was powerful.
But punctuation would make it easier to read.
| music4evah chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
...O_o This was kind of REALLY terrible. I mean, you didn't even use punctuation! You didn't even CAPITALIZE! You didn't even capitalize all of your TITLE!
And what's with all of it being in bold face?
THIS WAS TERRIBLE. Delete it.
| Cupcake Lover chapter 1 . 9/29/2010
honestly, you are a great writer! just saying. i reallly lik ethis. in the future do you think you can do longer pieces?