Reviews for Keeping Secrets
readingrox101 chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
Absolutely no punctuation. Couldn't you have put a comma in somewhere? I didn't understand that last part, anyway...
The Agent Of Insanity chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
interesting little poem you got here...I kinda like it's kinda short. Do you think you could make it bigger? Then It would rock my socks off I'm sure!...
music4evah chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
Dude. USE. SOME. PUNCTUATION. Why did you capitalize 'Secret' out of no where?



Just... Just STOP. Your writing can hardly even be called that. This is all just one huge run-on sentence with hardly any grammar at all! If you WANTED this to be a poem, you would have to split it into separate stanzas!

And AGAIN, why the bold face? It just makes it harder to read.