Reviews for When the Light Fades: Naoto Shirogane
FortunatexFool-P4G chapter 1 . 9/16/2014
Wow... That was mind-blowing! (XD)

I could imagine me sitting looking though Seta's eyes as that whole thing played out.
Wonderful writing. Keep up the good work!

Ame no Ryuubi chapter 1 . 2/18/2014
a good story and for my favorite p4 pairings keep up the good work
Felidane chapter 1 . 5/8/2013

I truly enjoyed this wonderful story! You managed to stay in character quite well, and you never took the characters too far, which is a thing most writers do. Although it was rather eventless, I was very hooked in the story and I was interested to see if you would handle their personalities well, which I was glad to see that you did.

Another thing I have to praise you for, is how well you captured the emotions of the characters. They always seemt to react the way they truly would if the situation was real, and it never made me feel like I was reading a story with different characters.

Interesting and very cute story, keep it up!
Blazehawkins chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
Nicely written story. Felt a little short, even though it was longer. More stories!
SeigZeon chapter 1 . 1/13/2011
love your stories this story FTW xD
sephisoverlord chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
mochiusagi chapter 1 . 11/5/2010
awwww that was cute! I esp love the last line, true to the game till the very end.
FINISHED-WITH-THIS-ACCOUNT chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
Wow, that was sweet! I like this story very much and the grammer is good. I hope you make more stories!