Reviews for Delicious!
Guest chapter 5 . 2/20
I READ YOUR FANFIC,AND DECIDED TO BUY POCKY!DUDE YOUR AWESOME...
thefierydeath chapter 5 . 7/11/2013
Awww! It's a darn shame you haven't written any more...
Angela Annette Dixon chapter 3 . 11/7/2012
Awww so sweet kairi :3-nya
Angela Annette Dixon chapter 2 . 11/7/2012
Lol yeah I remember this from episode 3-Nya
THE ZEEBRA KING chapter 5 . 8/15/2011
Aaah! Thank you sasa-Chan! This was so cute!

Pfft! Nagi made rima look like a lesbian

And they were together! EXTRA POINTS! (no, not actually keeping track)

But thank you so much, this was really sweet :) I'll be looking out for the nextchapter!

BOW DOWN TO THE ZEEBRA KING! :D
ichangedit chapter 5 . 8/14/2011
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww kawai!
THE ZEEBRA KING chapter 4 . 7/8/2011
well, HAVE FUN AT YOUR PARTY!

and i think that this fic doesnt need a kiss

i think this is very cute, i think you of all the canon couples, this one is the most definite

and as for the contents, I LOVE IT!

this is so adorable!

oh, and as for a recomendation,

can you do rimahiko? and as for the food, i thinking pocky, rima has sharing isues right?

welp thats all, KEEP UP YOUR AWESOMENESS!
THE ZEEBRA KING chapter 3 . 7/8/2011
AW!

your completly right, yairi does need some love!

i like this couple souly because of its innocence and cuteness and the contrast between yaya and kairi :3

i think this was cute

BOW DOWN TO THE ZEEBRA KING!
THE ZEEBRA KING chapter 2 . 7/8/2011
GAW!

heh, i like this chapter, usually, amuto storys are involded with vampires and maids but this one really brings out the cutness (and perverdedness *ikuto coughcough*) of amu and ikuto's relationship!

BOW DOWN TO THE ZEEBRA KING!
THE ZEEBRA KING chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
HA!

Rima is a natural-born slave driver!

Aw, poor nagi .

haha!

I love your story this one is funny so far

BOW DOWN TO THE ZEEBRA KING!
Music no Iken chapter 4 . 11/20/2010
AWWW! I LOVE KUTAU! Good job!
sunburnesd chapter 4 . 11/13/2010
i really liked this alot but isn't this a ramen couple?
Heartyunyun chapter 3 . 11/12/2010
Aww chap 3 was really cute! .
NessieWinsa chapter 3 . 10/14/2010
Lol, you're right! Yairi DOES need more love, I think it's cuute

Just a teensy weensy critisizm, please avoid jumping from present to past verbs, it can become confusing for the reader. Ex. (The girl in question is making sugar cookies as a treat for Utau Hoshina, who's going to have a concert later that evening.)

Also, I think the end was just a little too rushed, just a little. Hardly noticable, so it's really fine, just something that nags me a bit, though who am I kidding? I probably started a story or ended a story like this before too.

Keep it up!

-NW :3

PS. ANOTHER RIMAHIKO STORY SOON! Pwease? :)
pinkkittyninja chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
omg that's sooo weird people call me sasa too! (well sasa is my chinese name!) Anyway these stories so far are pretty cute and funny! you should seriously continue!

-Cookie
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