Reviews for Broken Spirit, Renewed
TinaF chapter 9 . 1/30/2017
Great story! Thank you for sharing.
Cheesypotato72 chapter 9 . 12/16/2015
Amazing! Keep writing your an inspiration to read your stories is so great.
LaverylK chapter 9 . 2/20/2015
This story was intense for me but I love Alice and Bella together.
Guest chapter 9 . 3/23/2013
I thought it ended perfectly
Rose829 chapter 9 . 1/23/2011
OH EM GEE! this is so beautiful :')
The Queen's Saviour chapter 9 . 10/26/2010
I loved it!

The ending felt a little rushed, though.. but despite that it was still awesome! :D
SamIam1234 chapter 9 . 10/25/2010
I agree. And Edward should die in the end of the REAL twilight saga. Someone should write a book called "Someone was breaking Edward's dawn by hitting him in the face with an eclipse and tearing his twilight off"
minako366 chapter 8 . 10/24/2010
Wow
shaz89 chapter 9 . 10/24/2010
uh well i'm sad you finished it so soon

but love that edward got what he deserved

i think it was a bit soon for them to be getting married but if this is what you think is right for them then i respect that

overall i loved the chapter
samaramorgane chapter 9 . 10/24/2010
Edward got what he deserve!Personally,I think a mariage this earlie in a relationship is a bit rushed but anyway I guess sometime you go with the flow and it's right!:)
bleach number 1 fan chapter 9 . 10/24/2010
very nice i loved it that was sutch a cool w ay to take him down at first i thought charlie would have but the love of her life saved her life very nice and hahah dont wory about it i think it ended the way it should have great fic i loved reading it and i cant wait to see more of your work in the future :D
MeganCSmith chapter 9 . 10/24/2010
I think it ended like it should off. It was a great story, I loved it! x
bleach number 1 fan chapter 8 . 10/24/2010
wow intense chapter so will they capture or kill him i know id kill him i cant wait to find out and i hope alice is alright :D good luck with this i cant wait to see more this is such an interesting fic
minako366 chapter 7 . 10/22/2010
Awe poor esme. I cant wait to see what happens when rose finds out and in turn Emmett...scary
bleach number 1 fan chapter 7 . 10/22/2010
wo wintense chapter i liked how bella and alice reacted to there litle moment that was nice great work i love your wrighting style and i cant wait to see more :D
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