|Reviews for London Fog|
| Shadowvixen89 chapter 1 . 7/1/2013
So far so good, but I can't tell you until I have more to go on. Quite promising though.
| Night Valdez chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
please, please, please update! *puppy face*
| Liliesshadow chapter 1 . 5/10/2012
Ooooo! This is very nice, despite the fact u wrote this two yrs ago...u prob won't update...
| grossasstoenails chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
Interesting start! Maybe you should continue?
| Lealeigh Rush chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
Nice opening. I hope you will continue soon. :)
| Tbonechick2011 chapter 1 . 9/21/2010
First of all:
I love the story plot you have going on behind your works! It's really admirable!
However, as a writer, I hope you take these tips:
1) Detail. People love detail.
2) It seemed like you rushed right into the story line. I, too, have experienced such a problem and I found that my stories didn't last as long as I could. Perhaps if you wrote longer sentences or more detail as to why Holmes hates his sister, or draw it out in someway. I guess what I'm trying to say is, your chapter seemed really short and a lot happened in that short chapter.
But I love your story none the less, and if you want someone to beta, just let me know and I'll be happy to look it over to spelling or grammatical errors! Great job! I can't wait for the next chapter!