Reviews for Makeover and Condoms
A FEMALE chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
I read this story, and i wish it was longer.
It was kinda weird, but i liked it.
I am a fifth grader:)
You should keep going it could get so much better!
It was just getting better and.. well... wrong:):):):)me like!
Antway great story you should keep writing it it is so cool
Guest chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
This is absolutely terrible. The writing is crap and who the hell are these extra characters? Why is there is a text face in the middle of the writing? Why is the whole thing is bold? Why would Mimi get an entire makeover and THEN want to go swimming? I'm so confused by the crappiness of this. Please try not to suck, thanks.
ChibiChocolateAngel chapter 1 . 9/21/2010

Sorry...I couldn't help myself...

The Angelo parts I could do without but~ it was awesome!