|Reviews for Pebble in the Pond|
| Alyss Mainwaring chapter 4 . 10/25/2015
Oh wow. You have really hit home here for me.
The exact feelings of a young carer summed up in a nutshell.
| sagejjj chapter 4 . 4/15/2015
| The Writing Wizard chapter 4 . 7/24/2014
I like it so far. What happen next?
| Absolute Path APS chapter 4 . 1/25/2014
| Caithlinn13 chapter 4 . 4/14/2013
Are you going to finish this story? Although it's been a few years already... I'd like to know what happens next. :D
| Guest chapter 4 . 10/26/2011
Awsome book so far. About the apprentice problem DON'T go kill the mother all of the sudden. the Ranger
| logophilia chapter 4 . 10/2/2011
Lovely story :D Great writing, and your alternate-ish characters are brilliant!
| crimsonsword142 chapter 4 . 7/26/2011
Love it! It's absolutely Amazing how you can alter a story so dramatically, but keep everything as it was. I love how your introduced Alyss, Horace and all of the other Ward children! Amazing! XD
| Elfpen chapter 4 . 12/6/2010
I thought I reviewed this chapter already? I suppose I haven't. Botheration! Terribly sorry.
This was really good. I loved that you brought up the whole idea that Will no longer has any dreams or delusions of becoming a knight, which were integral in book 1. I like how you shifted his focus on to caring for this mother... Though I'm not sure how long that will last... *foreboding!*
All of the canon characters were wonderfully done, and I think you even managed to capture George's peculiar personality in what little he said. :P Jenny especially made me smile.
It was all very good, and the ending sets it up perfectly for another update. *COUGHCOUGH*
| JaffaCake13 chapter 4 . 11/19/2010
I like it, although I want you to get it up to apprenticeship soon, but I think that there were a few bits where we were in one moment, and I felt like you left a few things out. :)
| Blackhawk1997 chapter 4 . 11/15/2010
| Arya Daeriel chapter 4 . 11/15/2010
Oh...my... EPIC! This is quite epic! I think you did the ward children really well! Update again soon!
| Lauri3n chapter 4 . 11/15/2010
This is really good.
| Russingon5eva chapter 4 . 11/15/2010
| Just A Little Birdy chapter 3 . 11/8/2010
Awesome! I am almost envious that I didn't come up with the idea, 'cause I have absolutely none...