|Reviews for Red, Not Green|
| enamoramiento chapter 1 . 3/5
Whew. You captured the different shades of red quite nicely :o)
| LizziePaige chapter 1 . 8/31/2013
Mmmmmm interesting. Caught my attention immediately but to be honest I wouldn't trust this Edward as far as I could kick him, I think she would be better to throw him and his proposal right out the door. Who treats a woman he has supposedly just brought an engagement ring for like that, the way he was with Victoria and the way he spoke to Bella was just not right at all. Loved the way the story was written, just did not like the idea of them being a couple after this.
| MsTorres chapter 1 . 5/11/2013
LOL this was nice in a really messed up way, loved it all the same though!
| Emx1490 chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
Loved the beginning, but seriously what is about that people always and I mean nearly all the time have a situation like this and when Bella confronts them basically all he does is kids for 30 secs and then all is forgiven?
Sorry but realistically in real life u would want a bigger explanation and apology. It doesnt explain vics look or the kiss of his late nights?
| LunaKaleidoscope chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
Hmmm. Interesting. Very passionate and definitely a different way to propose. Although it could have been emphasised by the cloud of jealousy and fury, I still would never trust the behaviour of Vic. Every kiss and touch seemed further than friendly and co-workerly. I think she's hiding behind the position of being the bosses daughter and the squirming? Hmm. She definitely seemed guilty of feelings for Edward on her part. I'd hope he never would go there with the fiery haired bitch? Haha. :)
| pauleen chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
That was hot and hot some more.
| M like Magic chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
Oh MY that Oneshot was just great. I love the green/red-eyed-jealous-monster-Bella :D She ist so much drama, so much fire, so much intensity. In one word: PASSION. And Edward is not so bad himself, and its just so natural that he is oblivious to what his behaviour aroung "Vic" must have looked like to Bella. Here he ist just a man, a blind and naive man. No superhero. So... BIG COMPLIMENT
| milicentforever chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
| Kickinl8tr chapter 1 . 12/14/2011
great one shot.
| Laura chapter 1 . 10/24/2011
Wait, what about the late nights he's been spending with Vic? That did sound kinda like he was cheating, I wouldn't have given up so easily if it was me :P
| romanceaholic chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
Very Intense.. Can't say I blame Bella for jumping to those conclusions after what she walks in on at the restaurant. I would probably think the same thing. Then remembering all those late hours at the office with Vic. Implies working with a man, not a woman. Boss's daughter be damned. You don't miss family dinners, girlfriend's birthdays, cooked dinners, etc... He missed too many things, too frequently, and the way Victoria was looking at Edward was he was her prey. She was using daddy as a way to make Edward stay late with her. To make him miss important things with Bella and family. She may have a boyfriend James, but used him and wrong restaurant as an excuse to get out of there before Bella kicked her ass. Bella was livid. If Edward thought he had a right to be mad because she was late like what once, what about all the times he stood her up to work overtime and spoil their plans. Victoria was all over Edward with intentions of making Bella think something was up between them. Edward being a man didn't even realize it was happening. He couldn't believe she was acting so witchy to a co-worker. A very unique way to propose marriage. A couple not afraid to show their feelings in public. Going for the third time. Celebrating in anger. That's a new one too.
| Nicffwhisperer chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
very very hot
| Chrisska chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
Angry sex is tied up with desperate sex in my chart of favourite fic smexin and this was just mind-blowing!
I loved it! Well done! :)
| cusic1981 chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
| TheRainGirl chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
Unf! That was delightful. Please to be writing more! ;)