Reviews for Breaking Point
Guest chapter 1 . 9/7
Good one shot and well written. I like this story. Thanks for sharing
Lucy chapter 1 . 9/2
Well, Umm, so... What next? You are going to add a sequel, aren't you? This was pretty good. Will this be a Severus mentors Harry story? I thought that it would be Lily's ghost who came to meet Severus, but oh well!James made a nice change.
MimiTaylor chapter 1 . 8/19
Oh Harry. :(
purrfus chapter 1 . 7/3
Excellent wake up call.
Angelfirenze chapter 1 . 2/11
Wow. I really liked this, despite how dark it is. Bravo!
batch of books chapter 1 . 1/9
Merlin's *_insert italics_* balls .
Amalthia chapter 1 . 12/24/2016
I liked your story.
Cztelnik chapter 1 . 7/24/2016
So incredible, stark emotions combined with unusual spirit interactions.
Sishopper chapter 1 . 5/13/2016
have you considered expanding on this? I'd really enjoy it if you did.
Rachelfairynose chapter 1 . 10/20/2015
This made me cry...I lived it. I would live to see more from this story!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/23/2015
Very grim one-shot, but very good and well written.
Are you considering expanding this? I want to know what happens next!
Blueberry Babe chapter 1 . 1/1/2015
ArcanePracti-cat chapter 1 . 6/13/2014
Wooo, good oneshot.
Short of course (being a oneshot) and grim indeed, but powerful too. Nice work. :D
wildtrance chapter 1 . 3/31/2014
Now I want to cry
Harry! I can actually see that happening
I'm surprised it didn't in the books
Maybe not suited for younger audiences
greenwings33 chapter 1 . 1/30/2014
Will you add more? Like, Snape slowly getting attached to Harry.
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