Reviews for Breaking Point
eiralu chapter 1 . 4/13
Damn. This was perfect. So much happened, so much could still follow. Thank you for this.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/22
Please could you continue with this story, with your writing skills behind it, I think it could be amazing.
JohnLockSher chapter 1 . 11/19/2017
incredible story! if you need help to update this i have some ideas
Guest chapter 1 . 9/7/2017
Good one shot and well written. I like this story. Thanks for sharing
Lucy chapter 1 . 9/2/2017
Well, Umm, so... What next? You are going to add a sequel, aren't you? This was pretty good. Will this be a Severus mentors Harry story? I thought that it would be Lily's ghost who came to meet Severus, but oh well!James made a nice change.
MimiTaylor chapter 1 . 8/19/2017
Oh Harry. :(
purrfus chapter 1 . 7/3/2017
Excellent wake up call.
Angelfirenze chapter 1 . 2/11/2017
Wow. I really liked this, despite how dark it is. Bravo!
batch of books chapter 1 . 1/9/2017
Merlin's *_insert italics_* balls .
Amalthia chapter 1 . 12/24/2016
I liked your story.
Cztelnik chapter 1 . 7/24/2016
So incredible, stark emotions combined with unusual spirit interactions.
Sishopper chapter 1 . 5/13/2016
have you considered expanding on this? I'd really enjoy it if you did.
Rachelfairynose chapter 1 . 10/20/2015
This made me cry...I lived it. I would live to see more from this story!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/23/2015
Very grim one-shot, but very good and well written.
Are you considering expanding this? I want to know what happens next!
Blueberry Babe chapter 1 . 1/1/2015
Thanks.
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