|Reviews for Dreams of Dark Chocolate and Stale Cigarettes|
| Guest chapter 26 . 1/12
You are the best. Honestly. I adored Neon Hearts and I adored this, and if I didn't have to sleep I would be starting Cinders in the Ashtray right now. I just can't believe the devotion you have to these fics, the work and detail you put into them. In every chapter I find some adorable little snippet of dialogue that makes me giggle or squeal (out loud), and then there were the arguments and places where the tone was so cold and tantalizing I felt like my heart had stopped. Congratulations; you are my favourite fanfiction writer EVER. Thank you for this story.
| MikoUchiha chapter 26 . 10/25/2012
great story :)
| Guest chapter 9 . 12/30/2011
I noticed the double meaning :P
| harlequindreaming chapter 26 . 11/8/2011
I loved it. Well-written, fantastic plot, and definitely a change from all the action-packed, death-defying fics I've been reading about this pair. But it's a welcome change; very much so. It was sweet.
| itsatruemiracle chapter 2 . 11/6/2011
this is awesome so far
| Zachary Finnius O'Leary chapter 26 . 9/28/2011
Loved it... I really did like the story. I think Mello learned his lesson.
| Zachary Finnius O'Leary chapter 14 . 9/27/2011
So normally I don't review long stories until I get to the end, but I need to go home from work and need a way to mark my place. I am very much enjoying this story and I look forward to reading more of it. Thank you
| XMattyXandXMelsX chapter 10 . 6/17/2011
Ha, I didn't even have to listen to those songs, I already have them memorized. xD lol
Nice story. (:
| foreverunloved chapter 26 . 5/31/2011
T-T *sigh* I just wrote you an incredibly long reply and then it got deleted... Stupid phone 3 so here ish my shortened thumbs hurt version XD :
O_O OMFG I LOVED YOUR FAN FOC IT WAS SOOOOO CUTE AND SOOOOOOOOOOO AMAZING! _ you did a really great job! I even added a quote from it to my list of, "great quotes from grat fics" and the quote I chose was: "but Mello thought otherwise. Clever, no; annoying, yes." XD lolz it just makes me happy lolz :3 so yah have a great day I look forward to reading the sequel! :D
| Lavinnia chapter 26 . 4/20/2011
I thought that this was a great story, and I actually came across it while looking through one of my favorite author's favorites. I figured that if a good writer likes another's writing, it's probably very good. You are an excellent writer and I enjoyed this story very much.
| Kari Twilight Mist chapter 26 . 4/18/2011
Oh wow. I'm so sad it's over. :( I'm glad, in the end, Matt and Mello got absolved from their crimes.
| ColonelPony chapter 11 . 4/13/2011
Too rushed, much like the rest of your story. Not enough foreplay, not enough detail. Which detracts from the intimacy of it.
| 435t3456436534636536 chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
I read this whole thing and please see the personal message I've sent you to see just how much I love this story
| Mustached Kira chapter 26 . 3/31/2011
i loved the ending ')) i cant wait for the sequel xD your'e a very awesome writtier keep up the awesome work xD
| Mustached Kira chapter 22 . 3/30/2011
*makes grabby hands* cant wait for the other chapter DX nice cliffhanging xD I Was so anxious throughtout the whole chapter..you can really create suspense hehe again awesome -kira