|Reviews for Hunters and Prey|
| FriendofMolly chapter 16 . 12/9/2012
Oh Merlin! Finally, the plot to destroy Ginny has finally been uncovered. I did have a feeling there was more to the drunken episodes than it appeared. The culprits have been named and best of all Lestrange has been located. The fight is on. I guess I was wrong as far as thinking it would be a while before we discovered just who was stupified. I'm thinking it was a good thing that the two Law enforcement groups "collided". Please post the next soon.
| Unk chapter 16 . 12/8/2012
I rarely review, but this story is absolutely brilliant and deserves more attention than it's getting.
| Chris chapter 16 . 12/3/2012
Northumbrian, your stories are the most convincing Potter fanfiction I've ever read. I generally find the names and personalities of non-cannon characters cringe-inducing, but yours are compelling. Reading your stories I sometimes forget that Mark was not a character in the books. Your exploration of Lavender's depths is also excellent. You've left us with a bit of a cliffhanger here, and though we know from your other stories that Mark and Lavender both survive, I do hope that you're able to update soon. I'm eagerly awaiting the next installment!
| JetLaBarge chapter 16 . 12/3/2012
Somehow I missed reading about 4 chapters of Hunters and Prey. Had to go back and read them before this chapter. It’s obvious that I am going to have to re-read it all from the start once it is finished.
Fantastic how you are bringing it all together, not only this story but also tying in several of your other stories. I like the way you are filling in the Lavender Brown/Mark Moon story.
A question on process, on how you write. Was introducing Mark Moon and Lavender in the story from the start? Or as it was written did that develop later? I like that we find out how Lavender was bitten. I also agree with the comment that Lavender as a werewolf is in much better shape in every way than when she was hurt and dying. Just one “little” problem.
So, one more chapter or two? I would guess there is either a conclusion, or the climax and a concluding chapter coming.
| aalens chapter 16 . 12/2/2012
You do accents superbly. It is such a pleasure to read a HP fanfic written by someone British so one does not find oneself wincing at all the Americanisms.
This is an exciting story. I love it so far. (And knowing your stories that means I'll love it right to the last word of the last chapter .)
| Stephanie O chapter 16 . 12/2/2012
Yay, an update! :) I can't wait to see Harry's reaction to Ginny's apartment getting ransacked...and to find out if all their wating at both G's apartment and the Knockturn Alley apartment pays big dividends. Mark's certainly getting to see plenty of excitement - sure hope his date with Cara goes well the next day! I hope you'll be able to update soon!
| MelGinnylover chapter 16 . 12/2/2012
Yay finally you updated...loved it...adored it...i wish u could update faster though...
| MHood80 chapter 16 . 12/2/2012
Great chapter, lots of information and tying things together nicely. Really good from Mark Moon's perspective as he plays such a role in the later stories. Great job, can't wait to see more.
| Jen chapter 16 . 12/2/2012
Excellent story! I'm thrilled to see that you're still working on it. I can't wait to see what happens!
| luckydoggy chapter 16 . 12/2/2012
I love the amount of detail and back stories you put into writings, it seems like a legitimate continuation of the Harry potter world
| PhillipWDE chapter 16 . 12/1/2012
What's gonna happen? What's gonna happen? Guess I'll just have to keep reading! :)
| Lilyp chapter 16 . 12/1/2012
Quite interesting, even if it is a little difficult to read for someone that isn't even a native English speaker. So, that's how Mark first met Lavender? An ingenious way. a great chapter and it was worth the wait even if there's no H/G in it.
| Oriondruid chapter 16 . 12/1/2012
Excellent action stuff and well written as usual. I take it this is the beginning of the famous fire incident? I've been wondering when we'd get told about that. Practick Alley, love it another fine pun name in the JKR tradition. :o)
Mark's accent seems a little heavier in this, but I take it that's because he's a bit younger and also he's around fellow Scots though. He's not had time with Lavender for it to soften, or some might say become 'corrupted'. :o)
| intikhabalam12 chapter 16 . 12/1/2012
Good and exciting story. This chapter, although it doesn't involve our favorite couple, is still entertaining to read. I really wish for a quicker updates. I just wish that you finish this story and then concentrate all your writing energy to "Strangers at D" as there is so much gap in the timeline that it is difficult for me to keep track. Anyhow I like your stories alot and hope that you also write some pre-battle stories like HBP GINNY POV stories. :)
| potternut190 chapter 16 . 12/1/2012
In my review on SIYE I asked about the two operations but I realize now the Identity Portkey Card announced three different operations: Hunter (twice), Prey, and Lavender. Was that a slip or were there three separate operations going on?
I like how you set up Mark's faulty pocket-good storytelling.
Interesting that Cara used Mercia twice and Mark used Sassenachs. Do the Welsh and the Scots use seemingly ancient terms for the English to this day or is this a magical thing? (Yes, a dumb American asking.)
Loved "daft wee blonde lassie"