Reviews for Hunters and Prey
BesideMoonlight chapter 7 . 8/6/2013
Great job Harry. Real great job...
BesideMoonlight chapter 4 . 8/6/2013
Poor Harry. I love how he handled Tavistock! Great Chapter. I liked the idea about the quill.
Hedwig35 chapter 17 . 7/29/2013
Just read the story so far! It was a great read - I hope for an update now with the rest of your readers. :-)
mellpell chapter 17 . 7/24/2013
This is such an entertaining read! Poor Ginny and Harry. Stupid Ron! Please please please update soon, I need to know what happens!
LCplMike chapter 17 . 7/17/2013
I have really enjoyed this so far and am looking forward to the next chapter. I especially liked the chirchill quote from Hermione earlier on.
Lokken.8 chapter 17 . 7/5/2013
Another one of great stories of your. Love the chapter sequencing! Please give us another update soon! Pretty please!
musingmarauder chapter 17 . 6/23/2013
I'm slowly making my way through all your fics. I'm not going to leave reviews for all of them because there are lots and it would take ages, but I just wanted to say that your writing is wonderful. I can completely imagine things happening your way. I look forward to reading more and I hope that you're still working on the unfinished fics. Thanks for sharing.
Heather Longbottom chapter 17 . 5/28/2013
I recently reread Tales of the Battle & Grave Days, and I can't wait to get to the part of this story where Rabastan & Goyle get what they deserve! I really enjoy your stories!
FriendofMolly chapter 17 . 5/12/2013
I know I'm a bit behind. It was good to catch up though. I am relieved that the cause of Ginny and Linny's drunken behavior was finally discovered and removed. It was surprising that it was Daphne who started it. It sounds more like something Pansy would do. They have to be suspicious of the company itself, seeing that it is owned by all DE's. Now that it is exposed, I'm thinking that the guilty ones are at this moment either in the hands of the Sheriff or fighting them. Since the Aurors were called it's probably still a battle. I'll be waiting for the next.
PS Until all are incarcerated, Ginny and Linny should not take anything from anyone but family. Even then it needs to be examined. What a pain.
TroyWeb chapter 16 . 4/16/2013
Very creative story. I like the good old fashioned detective work in tracking down the remaining Deatheaters and Snatchers. The Ron and Hermione arguing instead of helping is annoying but I really enjoyed your more mature version of Harry. Also all of your OCs are well written and add to the narrative.

Keep up the good work.
lisa chapter 17 . 4/11/2013
i've always hated Ginny but here i am reading your stories. good job you 're a great writer! :)
diva.gonzo chapter 12 . 4/6/2013
Oh North, I enjoy this oh so much. The details you convey in the entire storyline (yes, I went back and re-read the entire story this week before I remarked on it) are lush, decadent, and exquisite.
You interweave your story among the others (and I love the Baliff Mark Moon - such a gentle yet strong soul!) - and you bring details to the story that make it a delight to read.
The most though was the purging of the potion - and the ingredient list. Brilliant!

I am now anxiously awaiting more, at your leisure of course.
Lorelei Lynn chapter 17 . 4/3/2013
I just caught up on this great story and I liked the non-linear format as a way to keep all the plot strands moving. I also think you've done a good job with your creative additions to the wizarding world. And then you made me laugh out loud with Luna's job offer!
Keep up the good work!
ClaireBear1982 chapter 17 . 3/29/2013
Finally all caught up. May I say wow?! This has been one heck of a rollercoaster I have to say. You are an amazing writer and I'm totally captivated by this. It's so cleverly written, I love the potion. That is totally impressive, I did wonder who or what could be controlling Ginny for her to act like that. I really like Dacia, she's a very clever sweet woman. Lavender is brilliant. I really hope they all catch Lestrange too. Love that Harry and Ginny's Patronuses changed to Phoenixes, have to admit at first I thought the ghost of Dumbledore had conjured it.

I really can't wait for more of this now :) Btw I can't remember what chapters but there are a few spelling mistakes. Sorry to nit pick and all that.
JC70s chapter 17 . 3/28/2013
Awesome chapter, very powerful. That sequence between Ginny amd Harry ending with their new Patronus was very dramatic and exciting. I've been following this story for years now, and it always is a trill! Thanks! Please update soon?
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