|Reviews for The Proposal|
| QuickStar chapter 1 . 11/13/2010
XD the ending with the doves just made me laugh
| Saavik13 chapter 1 . 10/17/2010
nice set of stories. i look forward to reading the rest.
| Supa Supa Bad Truly Mad Moves chapter 1 . 10/4/2010
Aw, that's great. Four great things are started, all at once.
Whoa, I had assumed that this was the conclusion... but there's more? Can't wait for that, then! I'll be waiting.
| Trich chapter 1 . 9/26/2010
i love your story, but why do u upload it everytime as a new chapter? wouldn't it be easier to have it as several chapters in one story0?
| Spirit of paladin chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
All these stories you posted one after the other are actually chapters of one longer story, no?
You know, if they're really a part of the same stroy they should be uploaded using the chaptering feature and not as separate entries. It could get you reported if the stories are chapters and not one-shots. You should specify that.
| James Birdsong chapter 1 . 9/21/2010
I might call this great :D