|Reviews for Golden Key|
| Melissa chapter 1 . 11/12/2010
| Anastashia chapter 1 . 10/1/2010
I like this a lot; it's got a wonderful feel about the depth of the story you're telling. I would recommend you put some type of marker where the time changes take part. It takes reading of a bit before you realize that's happened the way it is now. That distracts from the overall story a bit.