Reviews for The Best Intentions
KelseyBea chapter 1 . 9/30/2010
Oooo lala! Great one shot! I like the handy Edward or bluecollarward too! Very humble and sweet! I'm not so sure about the over-confident bella... But that's ok! I really liked this! Very cute!
LindseyCullen1979 chapter 1 . 9/29/2010
It was an awesome one shot any possibility of making it into a story?
keyecullen chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
Now that was a great little one shot! Thank goodness for Google! You can find out how to do anything there! LOL!

kmfroggi chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
i love when bella takes charge, edward thinks too much! great o/s! so hot. lol
KannnD chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
Great little story there! Loved it!
Sunsetwing chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
Loved this one shot, so happy it went the way it did.
TEAMEJforeverloveTWILIGHT chapter 1 . 9/26/2010
So another one shot! This is exciting! And you know what else is exciting? Next Monday! Haha! Cause its this chicks birthday! Ahahaha! Anyways lets get back to the story! Hahaha. He seriously googles stuff, this is soo funny! D Im cracking up Haha. Aww, That was too cute! And if you look back on all the things that happened, she so did it all on purpose! Its awesome! I love the little Bella you created! Anywhoo i loved this little story soo much! It was fucking awesome and wonderful! I just love your writing and can never get enough of it! Lol! So im done for now! Cant wait for any new updates! D

Lee723 chapter 1 . 9/26/2010
*Rawr* that was pretty hot. heheh.

HandymanWard is yummy.

Awesome twist with Bella playing the nice, shy, reserved girl at first. She was PLOTTING for him! hahahah. Awesome!


Sunflowerfields chapter 1 . 9/26/2010
Awesome O/S, thanks for sharing it!
gossip-bangkok chapter 1 . 9/26/2010
ohhhh! I like

Thanks for sharing ;)
twilightmom1 chapter 1 . 9/25/2010
Loved it. I'm glad Bella did something, cuz Edward wasn't going to.
Ant Upi chapter 1 . 9/25/2010
loved this Edward and Bella...
MissRe chapter 1 . 9/24/2010
Woohoo! Go Bella. Loved the way that she seduced Edward small step by small step. All the excuses were awesome. :) But her holding the AC plug? Totally topped the list. Loved that she was confident and made Edward let go of his worries about the age difference. Awesome birthday present for him. Thanks to Joayla for buying this and sharing it with us! Awesome job.
cshorte chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
Loved it!
Mrs.Robinsome chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
"How did I not know you were such a little vixen?"

This Bella seems fun and fiesty.

Liked them both!

E's final thought "This was officially my best birthday ever." perfect.

Thanks 4 sharing!
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