Reviews for Chocobo Rider
Guest chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
you know when you put a * symbol after something you normally put in a authors note or something to explain why it is special.
Guest chapter 4 . 8/21/2012
It look's good and I will look forward to seeing it again.

The Crimson Mage.
1sunfun chapter 3 . 7/26/2012
Nice.
Hikari Kaiya chapter 3 . 6/17/2012
Option 1? Pwease?
PurpleFireDrake-25 chapter 4 . 6/16/2012
thank you for keeping writing i'm very glad you won't be stopping will you be under the same penname at aooo? i would very much like to follow you there
voidal chapter 4 . 6/16/2012
I'm sorry to see you go. I'm reading a few of your stories and was wondering if any of the sites you are going to have a story alert.
Sinnii chapter 3 . 5/8/2012
Well this is interesting. I assume Harry decided to keep being referred to as 'Mako' to distance himself from his life prior...once he remembered it.

It is an interesting idea but I feel that it was a bit rushed. I would have liked to see the feelings between Harry and Cloud blossom and develop, see the dance around each other before they finally come to grips with how they feel and decide to be lovers... It would add to the emotion for the two to just realize their love for each other only for Harry to be ripped away from Cloud and brought back to the world and life he wished to forget.

Admittedly... the ending could have been expanded on, and Voldemort's actions seemed a bit OOC to me... though I only have the most basic grasp of him as a character. But the ending seemed a bit hastily tied together. Some expanding on this fic would do wonders.
naru894 chapter 3 . 10/23/2011
please write a sequeal i dont care if its a oneshot or a tree chapter, i acttually prefer the three chapter or a huge oneshot :CD but please write a sequel
TheSmartIdiot chapter 3 . 10/3/2011
I know it's been a long time since you updated this story but a sequel would be amazing! ;)
Haru Inuzuka chapter 3 . 9/18/2011
-giggles- This was adorable/cute/awesome/cool! A sequal with three chapters, please. -
Mistress of Darkness32 chapter 3 . 8/24/2011
Loved your storY. It was very good. As for my vote I would like to see a sequal with three chapter please.
DirectSomething chapter 3 . 8/7/2011
1. A sequal with three chapters

hehehe..i hope i'm not late, great story! (haha.. a simple review..)
Yoru no Nx chapter 3 . 6/1/2011
Option 1
BlackFox34 chapter 3 . 5/23/2011
please a sequal ... damn didnt spell that right ... anyway please do a part 2 with 3 chapters. and it was gud!
cullengal101 chapter 3 . 4/8/2011
hey

please write a sequal
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