Reviews for The Mirror
kj chapter 1 . 3/28
I dont care that this is a 2010 fic i had to say this was beautiful.
GrimmReflections chapter 1 . 3/19
Let's rip out my heart, I don't need it T_T...seriously though this was really good.
Nebelsue chapter 1 . 1/3
I loved your story :) We feel at the beginning that there's something odd in this story of imaginary friend. Besides If I had a doubt about Matthew's being Alfred' dead twin, the end was perfect. I am particulary fond of the moments where Alfred try to make Matthew jealous...
ahappygoat chapter 1 . 11/3/2014
i love this story! good twist ending w though i wish it were longer! im a selfish reader and i neeeed to know more, this could go on in so many different ways. but at the same time it was the perfect ending. great story!
SouthParkKyman chapter 1 . 10/31/2014
I have no words for this, this is just so amazing
27aquarrow72 chapter 1 . 9/5/2014
F*ck...
F*ck! F*ck! F*ck! F*ck! F*********ck!
Please. PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!
This is getting interesting...

FavFol
GenderBender25 chapter 1 . 7/24/2014
Oh dear lord. Why? This is too interesting! Give me a sequel please!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/13/2014
I have no words to describe how I'm feeling at this current moment.
ochaofice chapter 1 . 3/9/2014
i really love your story! i wish you would make another chapter because this could go two ways ether the parents believe and apolagise and try to get to know canada or they fear this because there is a chance it could be "real" take away alfreds mirror! please dont leaving me hanging!
fangirl-4-ever-xx chapter 1 . 2/5/2014
I think my mind bursted at the last sentence... that last sentence really made the story for me.
PastaLover2016 chapter 1 . 11/23/2013
HOLY MUTHA FUCKIN SHIIITTRT WHAT THE HELLLLLLLL DAYUM THIS WAS SUCH A MIND FUCK I CANT EVEN HANDLE WHAT THE FUCK JUST FUCKININ HAPPENDED OH MY GOD...

What i meant to say was good job that ending was unexpected
ochaofice chapter 1 . 11/8/2013
please! write more! I love this so much and you really have the characters down!
TurtlesAndCanada chapter 1 . 9/11/2013
Jaysus. I felt suspense. I still do. This was beautiful. I don't even know. It just was.
damtoti chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
I thought this was an amazing and unique story. I love how you interpreted the Canada "invisible to everyone" into Alfred's delusions in this story, so no one else can see him. And it gives me shivers that he started developing sexual feelings towards his dead brother.

However, I hated the last line. You sort of built up this kind of tenseness, then you ruin it by stating the obvious. At the end, you try to TELL the reader what to feel rather than showing it to them. Because after the suggestion from the therapist, the readers already have an idea of Matthew in the mirror being a dead sibling. So a better way of writing the end might be extending the orphanage scene might be starting off with no extended family, then moving down to say his mom, dad, and BROTHER are dead. Then show them looking at the picture, feeling shocked at the way he looks (since it's exactly the way Alfred described Matthew). Have them ask for his name, and have the last line be her telling them "Matthew Williams". I feel like it would be a lot stronger that way.

But then again, it's just a suggestion :) Good work.
WindyCanyon chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
This was well written and the plot was wonderful.
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