Reviews for Closer to God |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You are the best author. I love your stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just found this while I was checking out"BetterinTexas" favorite list/I know why he has it as a favorite! I have already found "Apologies". I really enjoy the way you put the word on the paper! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg i absolutely loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know how I never found this story before but it's freakin awesome! Perfectly imperfect Paul :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well it was another spectacular story my dear. Loved it! Geena |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh too funny! Perfectly normal reaction from a father on his teenage daughter dating. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Paul was so concerned he would be punished by the council but that's not what they are about. They wanted him to realize his actions, fix them and apologize for them. They have become so sweet together. Another baby on the way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The break up was just the kick Paul needed in the ass to set himself straight. He really is trying so hard. He worked hard with help to get the house ready to be a home for them. He also apologized to Charlie. His proposal of marriage was unromantic but it was so Paul like. |
![]() ![]() ![]() At least she didn't go through it alone. I'm glad he was there and apologized. He had so much to atone for with her. I'm also happy he made an effort by taking the birthing classes alone. He wanted to talk to her to apologize and work things out. Between her request of no contact, Charlie, the pack and Sam's alpha order he couldn't. I'm really happy he told her first that he loves her, misses her, wants her and Caleb in his life. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So did the letter do the trick? It's kept him away but at what cost. He hasn't apologized or tried to work anything out. She said no contact so there is no way he can fix this. My heart hurts or Bella. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's just a clusterfuck. Bella is so hurt. Paul can only lash out in anger. Fingers crossed it works out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh Bella my heart is breaking for you. Paul really is an ass. The boy just doesn't know how to have a relationship and he screwed up big on this one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jake really is observant. He sees how destructive it has become for Bella. He believes its an imprint I think but with Paul's view on love it's become unhealthy. I'm glad he's discussed this with Kathleen, she got to see and hear all that Bella has gone brought with Ed and now Paul. Jake needed an ally to help Bella. Part of me don't want them to interfere but something has to be done. Bella is hurting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh B I feel for you. You are being let down by Paul. I don't want to bad mouth him but he is hurting you. Yeah the sex is great for you two but he's not there for you. I know all of this is new for both of you but it seems like he's not trying. He's there for you but he's also not, it's hard to put in words. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Quil's theory is sound but it only rests on the fact Paul did imprint on her. Embry thinking its what works for them just seems wrong and I believe Jake is right Bella's not okay with it. It really is an unhealthy way to have a relationship. With her insecurity already present and how things are between Paul and her is just too stress inducing. Which is horrible for the baby. Very unhealthy. Something has got to give or change. |