|Reviews for Beautiful Memory|
| XxTaintedxDaggerxX chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
| Kiri chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
The writing is pretty good, but the plot made me cringe. It's just that Hikaru seems really weak in this piece, and he really isn't like that in the anime. Your characterization seems off. Although he does mourn for Sai in the anime, I'd think that every May 5th, he'd be at his strongest instead of his weakest. Like when he played Ko Youngha on May 5th, he gave it his all to protect the memory of Sai.
I mean this as constructive criticism. )
| sweetyamiyugigirl chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
I'm glad that he told someone. Hikaru needed to talk about Sai and AKira'd be the one who would most likely believe him... Neat fic! Beautifully written.