Reviews for Second Chance, a new choice |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I like your opening, it's fascinating, I can't wait to read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Severus worries about Lily's safety so he leaves her alone with her muggle parents a few blocks away from his targeted home? And then afterwards he doesn't contact her for a week, leaving her to roam the neighbourhood and look for him where death eaters might still be watching? Yeah, that makes sense. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope lily herself accepts her own faults… plus, no 16 year old thinks like that |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Of courses the Death Eaters were watching the Alley! It was stupid to go there. Why are they returning to school? It is not safe! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Snape is not acting like an experienced spy! |
![]() ![]() Hello, can I translate this wonderful work into Russian? Of course, with the indication of the author |
![]() ![]() Severus's reaction is realistic. Of course he is stunned and emotional. Good beginning. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry to say, but I really hate this kind of story. The level of stupidity and angst are ridiculous and focusing so hard on both makes the story an emo-maso-slugfest. Really wish the edit had been about cutting that down and focusing on the actual story or at least not ONLY highlighting the terrible personal relationship skills of the characters. There is definitely a time and place for oversentimentality and Angst, but unfortunately I am not there at the time of reading this story. |
![]() ![]() Wow what an amazing story . Loved it so much . |
![]() ![]() Read it in two sittings. Nice 9.5/10 |
![]() ![]() Brilliant writing, meh for the story but that's just me and sane lol. If you like a Snape happy ending this is a wonderful story. Very well done and interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Truly beautiful, I loved this beautiful story. Thank you for writing and sharing it! |
![]() ![]() I don't know if you care, but NEWTs are taken in year seven. OWLs are taken in year five. |
![]() ![]() Fascinating job , top notch . It a masterpiece I would say , to be true to some areas of the original story and change exactly what the fans would want . I hope you the best of luck . Your a great writer and I wish the best to all who made this . |