Reviews for Second Chance, a new choice
Laud de Saturno chapter 71 . 11/2
Lo admito, después del capitulo 27 me salté varios capitulos y no me arrepiento XD
Guest chapter 71 . 10/25
I loved, loved, loved the first third-to-half of the book. So compelling and engaging and I couldn't stop reading! Wonderful Sev and Lily story. ...And then it just kind of went off the rails for me. I'm sorry because you put in such an effort, but I could not feel or appreciate all of your created characters. For countless chapters, I just started searching for "Sev" because he would disappear for long stretches of time and i wasn't into all of your side stories. Glad they got their happy ending though.
Guest chapter 44 . 10/3
Lily and the others are really pissing me off with their stupidity...and why didn't snape kill greyback?!
Guest chapter 42 . 10/3
Lily and the others have to stop playing fighters, cause they aren't. They are 17 year olds who haven't a clue what they are doing. Snape does. He's got experience!
Guest chapter 36 . 10/3
Come on sev! The hats song was directed to you!
Guest chapter 22 . 9/20
What about the little fact that a professor was involved?! Why didn't they so something about spinner?!
DarkPhoenix chapter 14 . 8/22
Hi! I usually review stories at the end, this is the first time I've decided to review while in the middle of a fanfic. The thing is, I just couldn't resist telling you that you are doing so well with this story. I won't lie and say your writing is flawless, but it's pretty darn good. The storyline is the real miracle. It's not just some boring: "Day 1: Snape is abused by his father. Day 2: Snape is abused more by his father. He talks to Lily" for five chapters like it is in a lot of these fics. I'm OBSESSED with Snape and I HATE it when people don't get his character right but I think you got it.
So anyways, I really like how you're making this super original and I just had to tell you after this chapter.
Keep writing!
HazeLilyBluera chapter 67 . 7/31
Horcrux, not horecrux.
HazeLilyBluera chapter 66 . 7/31
hahaha I understand you're from Denmark and have tons of grammar and spelling and it's kind of hard to work with English, but:

A word that is made up of two words is not held together with an apostrophe. So like something is just something, not some-thing. And it's however not how-ever.

OK I will look for more mistakes and announce them to you because I correct grammar even if people hate it. That's the flaw in me.
HazeLilyBluera chapter 61 . 7/30
wtf happened to severus?
HazeLilyBluera chapter 51 . 7/30
hhahaaha they're sooooooooooooooooooooooo embarrassing.
HazeLilyBluera chapter 43 . 7/30
Haha... actually goddammit is one word... not three...
HazeLilyBluera chapter 42 . 7/30
HazeLilyBluera chapter 41 . 7/30
who's da black haired girl?
HazeLilyBluera chapter 34 . 7/30
wait what happened to sev? sorry
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