|Reviews for Harry & the Mysterious Curse of the GirlWhoLived|
| Krimsons chapter 18 . 11/26
Great story so far! I'm honestly surprised how much I like how you've played out the whole concept of everyone else seeing Harry as a girl. I do wish that mystery would unravel a bit faster though. Regardless, it's been a very enjoyable read so far, so please update soon.
| Unca Bob chapter 18 . 9/8
Very interesting story. I've enjoyed what's here and I hope to see more soon.
| kabs9000 chapter 1 . 9/1
Very interesting, and quite confusing
I shall read on
| rocelmamaril357 chapter 1 . 8/17
| The Wigmonsters chapter 18 . 8/17
An interesting concept. The way Harry is forgetful and absent-minded about certain things and the way he interacts with everyone reminds me a lot of having adhd, which is pretty cool.
Having lived both believing i was a girl and now as someone who isn't a girl but is viewed as one by others, your writing captures a lot of these concepts pretty well. Saw another review saying they don't act like girls but uh, wrong. Girls act a variety of ways, seeing as they are all individual human beings with their own personalities and experiences. Girls sometimes have similar characteristics, having some similarities in the way they were socialized (which Harry has picked up on), but ultimately they can act literally any way because they are all different. Sorry, my point being, I enjoy your story.
The bit with Ollivander was difficult to read, but he was a character playing a part so y'know, whatever, it happens.
Lockhart is rather interesting in your story. It's cool.
I'm interested to see where this goes. Thank you for sharing your work with us!
| icecold1039 chapter 1 . 8/14
When did Vernon get the gun? The word gun is only used once in this chapter. At one point Harry says "that I was magic". That is wrong. It would would be better to say "that I was magical" or "that I had magic".
| Hypervene chapter 18 . 8/10
It's still alive? It's still alive! Wooooooo~
Keep'er goin', Author-san! A good story ya got going on here!
| Larenars chapter 18 . 8/11
Awesome story. I really enjoyed how you are changing up the details.
| KnowPein chapter 18 . 7/21
though what happens when puberty starts lolz...
So Harry is seen as female to magicals... male to himself and muggles...
is he a shape shifter... can't wait for this story to progress more...
hope you could find time and complete this
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/17
I feel i should criticise you although i cannot explain the details.
I feel you do not get the girls rightly.
They are 11 year old children. They are no feminists.
And they are not (yet) intersted in the other sex.
But that's not it.
It is more subtle.
I think you should get a second beta reader who is female.
Better, one who is mother to girls.
And, please do not get discouraged by just one single review.
Still, think about it.
| tanithlipsky chapter 18 . 7/18
oh dear. Harry has already done something rash...
| mar888 chapter 18 . 7/16
I like the chapter!
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/13
Obviously, I'd like you to continue this story, but cannot vote for it, because of anonymity :-)
It is great to watch people behaving different towards Harry because they suppose him to be a girl or "young lady" :-))
Yet there is a reason for that: Women can be as annoying as anyone, but they usually are weaker than men, so if a man loses his nerves and only hits once that might cause much more damage than intended :-/
| Riniko22 chapter 15 . 7/15
Thank you for the chapter, I will be looking forward to the next when you are ready to post.
| Guest chapter 8 . 7/11
This Flich mentor AU is the best thing ever