Reviews for Harry & the Mysterious Curse of the Girl-Who-Lived |
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![]() ![]() ![]() When will the “Curse” be broken. When did this kind of Curse, Mistaking Harry potter with “Harriet potter” even get cast? |
![]() ![]() "So Dumbledore supports it?" Parvati scratched her nose and hummed thoughtfully. "Well, I suppose he usually knows what he's talking about, right? I suppose that he'd make sure this Remus was as straight as a wand, right?" I am not sure that Remus is very straight at all, really... |
![]() ![]() I love your Nev characterisation and Hermione being the first to have a boyfriend is inspired. |
![]() ![]() "Sneakwitch." That's such a Harry Potter thing to call your spies. I love it. |
![]() ![]() Sorry this is anonymous The writing itself is awesome. I want to make it clear that’s it’s been a single chapter and I’m already hooked. And the premise is mildly explained but I am very, very confused. Pleasantly confused, and in a way that I’m wholeheartedly excited to read more, but confused nonetheless. Excited to see where it goes! |
![]() ![]() Very compelling! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chapter 3 and you still act as if it is alright to not inform us why he is either a girl who doesn't know she is one or is a boy forced to look like a girl, this forced me at least to scrim through everything, not read so I can see if it is worth reading in the meantime you just seem to throw that in the trash bin and force a story to go beyond the point where that is already made clear because there should be no reason that he hasn't gone to the headmaster the very first day to have him in the know how but no let's act as if this is all normal. |
![]() ![]() "No, I mean the colour is a hair colour," said Luna in frustration. "It's the colour of hair! Bother, I sound mad! I don't even know what I'm saying!" Hair-brand hair. Neat. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I favorited this years ago and only just realized it’s about being trans. Well, I assume it is. I’m bad at people, but this does seem fairly obvious. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahaha que está pasando!. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You are doing a fantastic job. I love your take of Harry as a girl (not girl). I look forward to the next time you get around to updating! |
![]() ![]() This fic is excellent! Thanks for sharing. :) |
![]() ![]() I feel the flirting is somewhat jarring there. Sure, Cho Chang & Cedric Diggory is not too out of place as a pair on their own (even if how they're trying to get Harry alone comes across somewhat creepy/awkward). However, Lavender, Parvati, Ron, Susan, Neville...Even Ginny and Luna went rejectful of Cho. So it's almost 23 chapters of near nothing, between the omake and crush(es) on Lockheart closer to rejection of the concept of teenagers having any romantic or sexual interest. Now, right after new year, most of Harry's friend circle is not just giving signs but building roads. The simultaneity, timing & higher starting level of competence at it comes across somewhat forced - combined with the family planning there, one might even suspect magical interference. Regardless, that's not to say I haven't enjoyed your writings so far, nor to say that this subject isn't of interest to address with this unique take on GWL (I see some readers already have ideas with time turner or that cliffhanger.) Just saying you might want to make it more gradual, staggered and spread-out next time (if that ever happens). |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi there! I've had your story as a favourite since 2010! It made me smile to see you still updating! I remember reading your first few chapters in high-school and I still come back to read some chapters. Take your time with finishing this story it fascinating and you've done an amazing job keeping us engaged in your world. I just finished school so I totally get it about being busy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woot, probably one of my fav hp fics so far. I could foresee some issues arising very soon with second base scenes. I feel like harry just just have Dumbledore swap his gender to full female until they can figure out how to fix the girl curse. He's already comfortable with people seeing him that way, and it would feel less like lying to Parvati while making out. |