|Reviews for The Bitter Pill|
| Sarah chapter 2 . 4/25/2011
hey, I really enjoyed this! I have to admit I did a little fan girl squeel at the Paisley Uni bit (I'm from Paisley!)
Please write some more!
| joshuahanna09 chapter 2 . 9/22/2010
hey liked the chapter, but alex is nineteen, james bond lost his virginity at 16,
just saying - teenage hormones are powerful things,
please dont think me weird, just saying what i think,
anyway - i'm hooked!
| joshuahanna09 chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
alright i have to say, fantastic beginning!
i loved the alex rider series, but was a little dissapointed by croc tears.
i think that horowitz created great characters, and i think that you could create really dramatic and emotional situations using alex and sabina. like in eagle strike, although i didn't think that was that well done.
all im saying is that i think if you can get a good storyline, you could really write a good fanfiction.
keep at it!