Reviews for Playtime
Night-Inscriber chapter 20 . 6/6
I think I found this via a tumblr rec.
I don't normally do kid!fics as they never seem... Right, i guess.
But not only do you get the toddler characterization on point AND their personalities, you give it to us in perfect adult mind set so we're sympathizing with pike and his day to day life dealing with crazy ( smart) children.

I had fond moments during each chapter as various little things made me smile, mostly because Jim and also Uhura. But I think the thing that made me snicker the most was baby Spock and his desire for strawberry ice cream. I just _ oh baby Spock.

R chapter 20 . 4/10
I was really stressed tonight and this story brought me worlds of joy. I don't normally read multi-chapter fics, I dont have the attention span, but this was exactly what I needed. Thank you so much 3
KkGgINoU chapter 20 . 4/5
If I could favorite this story many times over, I would.
KkGgINoU chapter 1 . 4/5
And here I am, you have me giggling like an idiot from my feels, because Pike is literally my favorite character in the whole of all Star Trek, both TOS and AOS... And Papa!Pike Kid!Kirk is one of my favorite dynamics in all of fandom. Geez. Not many people can pull something like this out of me. Kudos to you. :)
StarTraveler chapter 1 . 7/13/2016
I was just recently thinking about this fic so I've been rereading still giggle just as hard all these years later
Pisces146 chapter 20 . 5/15/2015
This is truly fantastic. I laughed and smiled the entire time.
Squibble the WhovianBreadstick chapter 20 . 11/10/2014
okay, honestly this completely genius.
I am powerless to the mystical forces of your hilarity: I laughed so hard my ribs actually hurt for a few hours after I finished. BRilliant!
Squibble the WhovianBreadstick chapter 12 . 11/10/2014
hey! hey!
please have some (Adorablly toddler-like) "Romantic" momemnts with Spock and Uhura.
Also: Either Lenny or Jimmy attempts to give Chekov the Talk.
GoldenBug Prime chapter 20 . 10/30/2014
This is awesome
Written Fire chapter 20 . 9/14/2014
I adored the heck out of this and honestly wish there was more. They were all /so adorable/ and I would love to know if they all ever met up again; how they would, if they would still be a crew, and who ends up with who. I'd love to know that for the adults as well; do they get a happy ending, love-wise?

This story was fantastic, and I thank you for writing it. I truly loved it.
Mirage chapter 20 . 8/15/2014
that...that is just the cutest szory i ever did read, so sweet, and i so loved the somewhat happy end...spock did ask to see Jimmy again and he asked to see bones again, so atleast these three kids stay somehow together...and the beagle puppy for scotty ...aww how sweet of Jon...
love this story so adorable and funny and cute and a touch sad...why had the only to stay together for one year...go pre-school not longer...but ok thats a school for intelligent kids so it may be because of this...
cute story
123456789D chapter 20 . 6/22/2014
so I'm a couple years late with this review... hope you don't mind...but I just had to say something after reading this, considering it was one of the most adorable things I ever seen! There were so many times I was giggling my head off and even more times when all I could think was "Awwww, that's so sweet!" I would tell you specifics but then we'd be here all day... Ok well I have to mention one thing, I adored little Bwones (not a typo) and all the morbid stuff he says! I was a little bit sad at the end... alright maybe more than a little... I'm just glad I managed not to cry... but it was close... anyway... then I just thought about all the kids coming back together to run the enterprise, so it's all ok! I just wanted to say that I loved, loved, still love this fic! Thank you so much for writing and giving us your work!... sorry about my rambling throughout this review... Hope to read more of your work! and thanks again!
Book girl fan chapter 16 . 12/16/2013
I'd be hopeless as a teacher. I don't think I could resist a pouting baby Vulcan.
Magiccatprincess chapter 20 . 11/5/2013
This was so adorable! Archer getting Scotty a Puppy! Bones and Spock both demanding to see Jim again! So great!
Monki-Neko chapter 18 . 10/29/2013
omg, i can't believe anyone would tell children THAT story! lol
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