Reviews for Edge of Reality
thomasquwack chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
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This.

Is.

Hilarious.

... Jeez, I was half expecting some moron to come out of nowhere and kick me into a giant pit... Phew!
dudeaga chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
Obviously, it's a dream within a dream within a dream within a dream within the Matrix.

C-C-C-C-C-Combo Breaker!

But seriously though, epic writing.
SpeedDemon315 chapter 1 . 12/25/2010
Hah, that would make sense that the tactician would be the one to dream the whole story up. Somehow, this reminded me of the Wizard of Oz and how everyone Dorthey knew got woven into her dream.

And as always, nice job!

SpeedDemon315
Trevor X chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
Cute and fluffy and filled with goodness. Mark/Florina interesting combination. Liked the dreamstate and linking back to the present.
kittykatloren chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
Ooh cool. Mark/Florina pairing, too, interesting. I like all the parallels, obvious as they are! Your description of the army after the fight was really nice too. Fun to read!

- Kitty
Xirysa chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
How was this my-oh wait.

Lol. I remember now.

(But you're really not blaming me, are you? I know you well enough.)

At any rate, this was cute. I quite liked it.

And now you've made me want to write something similar, too.

Uhhhhhh yeah.

So yes. WRITE MOAR.

(I should keep giving and corrupting you with ideas lol)

[Xirysa]