|Reviews for Sonic The Next Generation: The Final Curtain Call|
| kattobingu chapter 1 . 10/19/2011
Bad, bad, bad. Do not crowd all your sentences into one paragraph. Do not switch viewpoints every few sentences, either. It is annoying and extremely difficult to read. Your grammar and spelling need improvement, as well. Lastly, do us a favor and get the character names right. It was Mephiles who killed Sonic. If he was already Solaris, he wouldn't have needed to kill him in the first place.
Overall score: 2/10
| Koollolly chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
Please keep going! I want to see more :D
| Tornad0Watch chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
I'm interested, to be sure, but just try to fix a few things. Don't center it, makes it hard to read, and you may want to fix the characters; I don't think Elias is Elise.
Keep going, want to see more of this.