|Reviews for In the Midst of Darkness|
| lucifer-in-my-head chapter 1 . 8/16/2016
This looks quite promising! Haven't found good stuff in ages! I love how you're writing the characters, by the way! They're actually IN CHARACTER! You'd be surprised how hard it is to find in-character characters whilst searching for good fanfiction!
| spndeansammylov chapter 12 . 8/18/2013
i like it, nice story :)
| animechick57 chapter 12 . 12/22/2012
I'm probably 100th person who has said this but I cant help it
POOOR DEEAAAN (haha)
Sam side was a little off to me, I'm confused as dean with Sam being all tired and exhausted in half the story. I know he got beat up but they always get beat up in the show XD
Anyways love this story really... sad XD
| Guest chapter 12 . 12/16/2012
So dean got that bastard kansas good!
| monkeymuse chapter 11 . 9/10/2012
Is it bad that I want them to go after Sam. Hurt himjust to make Dean feel okay about killing them. Update soon
| Zuza chan chapter 10 . 4/16/2012
This is great, wonderful, so freaking exciting and interesting, and good written! Please continue soon, I'd like to read more~~
| nessie88 chapter 10 . 11/8/2011
I love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter, the plot is great and there is nothing i love more than hurt dean. good job sweetie and keep those updates coming. I am surprised that you only have 21 reviews. I know that when I am writing a fanfiction. reviews are the thing that spur me on and make me want to update faster. Great story xxxxxxxxxxx
| greendaypumpkin chapter 10 . 10/16/2011
Eeee! I NEED to know what happened to Dean! Not surprised Sam reacted the way he did! Update soon :)
| greendaypumpkin chapter 9 . 10/13/2011
Hey so happy that you updated this story, I'm just sorry it took me so long to get round to reading it. I really like the little hints that you're leaving us about what's about to go down and I think you've really improved with lengthening the descriptions. Although I still think the chapters and sections could be longer, I start to get really hooked and then it moves on a bit too quickly, and I think you have the real talent to really make it fantastic and even more engaging. I hope you don't think I'm nit-picking, I just really enjoy this story and want more out of it. Please update soon :)
| DeansMuse chapter 8 . 9/25/2011
Sam wasn't raped too, was he? Hope not.
Can't wait for the next update.
Hope life starts giving you some more time.
| sylia91 chapter 8 . 9/25/2011
The brothers break my heart, so broken but still more concerned about the other than themselves. I look forward to the bad guys getting their comeuppance soon.
| greendaypumpkin chapter 7 . 9/14/2011
Hiya, just stumbled across your story, I think it has real potential. I think you do a very good job of switching back and forth between timeframes. I think you did well not to be too graphic with the rape scene, of all the fanfic with sensitive material I've read, it seems to be the ones that don't go into too much detail regarding the actual event but deal with the character's emotional reactions, whatever that reaction may be. I find it's even more effective if the character themselves reveals the information in one way or another, perhaps as a way of healing, so the reader understands more how it affected them from their point of view. Of course that is just my opinion :)
One last thing, I can see that you clearly have the skill to write detail, but I don't think you're using that enough. I think that you would be able to demonstrate your abilities more if you went into more depth, longer paragraphs and chapters etc so that the reader can get more involved in the story and the characters. Especially with such a sensitive subject.
I really hoped that helped, I am by no means an expert, it's just my view as a reader and occasional author. As I say it's just my opinion. But I am really looking forward to reading more and seeing where you can go with it. I'm desperate to find out how Dean made it out of the hospital and I really hope that you update soon because I think this has real potential. Best of luck x
| Junkerin chapter 7 . 8/7/2011
you are one of the few Author who let Dean been the one who was abused. Well writen cant wait for more. But it took me a whiele to figure out how got Dean in hospital. Now I figured the helping Lady fond him in the motel room?
| nessie88 chapter 7 . 7/31/2011
Don't doubt yourself, it was a good chapter. Well written and full of emotion which is what anyone would want from a story. well done and i can't wait for the next chapter x
| monkeymuse chapter 7 . 7/30/2011
Very powerful update. The pain that you detail in such simple pose simply powerful