Reviews for Our Beginning
Quinntana2 chapter 5 . 11/7/2013
:)(: Wow...that kick has got to hurt.
I wonder how Alice will react to her wonderful declaration of love when she wakes.
Claire teasing this girl with her body and Alice's corresponding response is hilarious. :)(:
Quinntana2 chapter 4 . 11/7/2013
:)(: Claire is really torturing Alice and it's so mean.
I wish Alice could mess with her in return.
I'm liking the story.:)(:
Quinntana2 chapter 3 . 11/7/2013
:)(: Poor Alice, this is so not fair but it is absolutely amusing.
When she fell I couldn't not laugh and plus what she said after the fall.
Carlos better run for his life. :)(:
Quinntana2 chapter 2 . 11/7/2013
:)(: Shy and nervous Alice is so fun to read. I love Alice's explanation of her problem.
Claire already knows. HA! :)(:
Quinntana2 chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
:)(: Aww...Alice is adorable being all nervous and shy in Claires presence.
LJ is pretty cool. He knows Alice so well.:)(:
Rayne Arianna Maranochi chapter 12 . 9/23/2013
Awh fuck Rain! Fix it! Dammit they need each other more than you can possibly know.
aj-surfer chapter 12 . 8/20/2013
Love It. Can't wait for more :)
wolfmadmax chapter 11 . 2/16/2013
please update soon need to know how it ends love that rains in this. many rain and k-mart would be a good pair? hope you update soon give me a shout if your stuck or have writers block.
wolfmadmax chapter 12 . 1/28/2013
Update soon please. my opinion if it matters is that it is good so far, i like how rain is OK with the fact Alice wants Claire, i think you captured her personality very well.
Koko chapter 12 . 1/1/2013
wow wow whens this gonna be updated really interesting
Nabie A chapter 12 . 12/23/2012
This story's awesome. Update. Please?
poynton90 chapter 12 . 12/17/2012
I have really enjoyed the story up to this point. Please continue and good job so far :)
WhoKnows chapter 12 . 11/16/2012
Waiting for the next chapter, the story is amazing I truly like it, can't wait to know what happens now between Alice and Claire, update asap please ;_;
it's been fun chapter 12 . 10/30/2012
I've never wanted to punch Rain so hard before.
Diane chapter 12 . 10/8/2012
Great story. I love the triangle. Look forward to reading more.
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