Reviews for Next Time
YES chapter 1 . 3/25
Brilliant. You and your story are both wonderful - thank you for sharing your talent in characterisation, plotting for this couple!
FuN FiFi chapter 1 . 8/17/2015
Great fic! Betty Cooper is one of my favorite characters in the Archie universe, and while I don't ship her w/ Archie, I've always wanted her w/ someone who would appreciate her like she deserves, like Jughead or even Reggie. I think you've written a believable story about Betty and Jughead coming to terms with their feelings for one another. I especially liked reading this story from Jughead's POV; he's actually a very dynamic character who's kind of shoved in the background in favor of everyone else. But you've done his character justice for sure! I liked your characterization of Betty too of course; it's always wonderful to read stories in which she moves past Archie to consider other people vying for her attention. That being Jughead in this story was just the icing on the cake lol :-D
alysmith17 chapter 1 . 6/29/2015
WHY YOU DO THIS? FINISH IT!
JoTerry chapter 1 . 2/12/2015
This was awesome. Betty and Jughead are my favourite characters too. And yes, I also grew up with them. Write some more!
Unused Account Here chapter 1 . 1/31/2015
wAww
konny chapter 1 . 1/20/2015
it was so good please write a second part
Alba05 chapter 1 . 4/26/2014
Absolutely lovely, Naoko. Well-written, one of the best interpretations of how my favorite should-be couple of the Archie world come to realize they would be perfect for each other. Thanks for sharing!
Emily chapter 1 . 4/24/2014
Great story! You should continue!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/15/2014
Lovely story, rings close to how I imagined -and would have hoped - that these two would get together. Thanks for sharing with us!
Vi chapter 1 . 10/4/2013
I absolutely loved it. Great characterization and really well executed story. Betty and Jughead are my favourite characters as well and you did them such justice. Thank you!
Furrina chapter 1 . 9/18/2013
Beautifu l story... I loved their slow build. I loved how they moved towards each other, then slid in place like two pieces of a jigsaw puzzle until the picture made a complete sense...

God! Jigsaw analogies! Thought I outgrew them when I saw 15.
Technical Technicalities chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
Lol, I support all couples except Jughead/Ethel and Moose/Midge. In the Archie game they released, I paired Reggie/Midge, Veronica/Jughead, Archie/Betty amd Cheryl/Moose for some reason. Wtf goes through my mind...

Anyway, this was cute!
chr1steh chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
Awww, happy birthday, Betty! I love this pairing, thanks for sharing it :)
StrangerInTheOrangeFedora chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
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Madame Masquerade 64 chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
This. Was marvelous. I enjoyed every single moment and the ending was spot on for the characters. Well done.
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