| Reviews for Breathing |
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   Miko Eiko chapter 1 . 4/17/2020 Eso si fue un susto |
| sally chapter 1 . 9/13/2019 You write reall well and this part is really intense, but I dislike all the swearing, having Kirk taking the Lord's name in vain is unneeded, and revolting, and districts from the story and the moments. Only stupid, uneducated people need to punctuate their language with repeated foul language, and seems Kirk is always described as being super smart. |
| Eridethish chapter 1 . 5/1/2017 Perfectly written! Please tell me another is in order?! |
| whyarewordssohard chapter 1 . 7/23/2016 Such awesome writing! :D |
| Subakun-sensei chapter 1 . 2/22/2016 Good story! Thanks. |
| tanseynz chapter 1 . 8/19/2015 Holy moly, I swear I found breathing impossible during that story! Powerful. |
| tigerlily124 chapter 1 . 3/26/2015 Thank you! I have to admit that I'm a sucker for Spock whump lol. Well done! |
| sherdocwho chapter 1 . 8/26/2013 That. Was. AMAZING. I don't think I've ever seen a piece of work as brilliant and original as this. Characters spot on, wording precise, and everyone's favourite, spock torture! Keep on writing! |
| MarauderGirl KS chapter 1 . 2/2/2012 love it *-* |
| PadmeSkywalker10 chapter 1 . 12/4/2011 Those last lines were perfect. |
| Luna oscura chapter 1 . 7/9/2011 Wow, this night I wanted to read a good K/S story and certainly, I got it. This was amazing, I loved every bit of the fic, especially the tension and Jims care about Spock. Great job :) |
| Doni chapter 1 . 6/4/2011 That was just exceptionally done. Lovely. |
| bowlfullofcherries chapter 1 . 3/25/2011 wooooow. great. i feel like i'm on a high or something. it was that amazing. |
| lostterra25 chapter 1 . 3/15/2011 omg this has to be the best Trek story of spock and jim i have EVER read! |
| Zuvios Gemini chapter 1 . 1/27/2011 My eyes were the size of dinner plates for most of the story. O_O |