|Reviews for Breathing|
| sherdocwho chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
That. Was. AMAZING. I don't think I've ever seen a piece of work as brilliant and original as this. Characters spot on, wording precise, and everyone's favourite, spock torture! Keep on writing!
| MarauderGirl KS chapter 1 . 2/2/2012
love it *-*
| PadmeSkywalker10 chapter 1 . 12/4/2011
Those last lines were perfect.
| Luna oscura chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
Wow, this night I wanted to read a good K/S story and certainly, I got it. This was amazing, I loved every bit of the fic, especially the tension and Jims care about Spock. Great job :)
| Doni chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
That was just exceptionally done. Lovely.
| bowlfullofcherries chapter 1 . 3/25/2011
wooooow. great. i feel like i'm on a high or something. it was that amazing.
| lostterra25 chapter 1 . 3/15/2011
omg this has to be the best Trek story of spock and jim i have EVER read!
| Zuvios Gemini chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
My eyes were the size of dinner plates for most of the story. O_O
| Milarca chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
That was no nice :')
| Umbrae Calamitas chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
OMFG... could you please make this into a longer piece? I'm reading the whole Progression Series, but this piece alone... omg... it's so incredibly. So freaking incredible.
Live long. Live well. Write. Read. Dream.
| LadyAdarah chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
another excellent story in the progression series! yay!
| sithmarauder chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
I love you, and I love this.
Like, I REALLY love this.
| MoonstarWorld chapter 1 . 11/4/2010
Wow. A really great take on just how far Jim would go to save Spock's life.
| Bulls in Brooklyn chapter 1 . 10/8/2010
One quick thing, I suppose you could explain it away with future tech etc, but typically, I don't think they would shock a person who had drowned, because if he's drenched in water, the current would pass through the water and burn him. So...
| Maranni123 chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
...Wow. That was something else my friend. In a good way, I assure you. :D
Wonderful work! Half of me wants a sequel, but the other half doesn't. It's strange, but still this was amazing. XD
Bravo my friend! A beautiful piece of work! :D '10/10!