Reviews for Breathing
Eridethish chapter 1 . 5/1/2017
Perfectly written! Please tell me another is in order?!
ThisVioletofMine chapter 1 . 7/23/2016
Such awesome writing! :D
Subakun-sensei chapter 1 . 2/22/2016
Good story! Thanks.
tanseynz chapter 1 . 8/19/2015
Holy moly, I swear I found breathing impossible during that story! Powerful.
tigerlily124 chapter 1 . 3/26/2015
Thank you! I have to admit that I'm a sucker for Spock whump lol. Well done!
sherdocwho chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
That. Was. AMAZING. I don't think I've ever seen a piece of work as brilliant and original as this. Characters spot on, wording precise, and everyone's favourite, spock torture! Keep on writing!
MarauderGirl KS chapter 1 . 2/2/2012
love it *-*
PadmeSkywalker10 chapter 1 . 12/4/2011
Those last lines were perfect.
Luna oscura chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
Wow, this night I wanted to read a good K/S story and certainly, I got it. This was amazing, I loved every bit of the fic, especially the tension and Jims care about Spock. Great job :)
Doni chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
That was just exceptionally done. Lovely.
bowlfullofcherries chapter 1 . 3/25/2011
wooooow. great. i feel like i'm on a high or something. it was that amazing.
lostterra25 chapter 1 . 3/15/2011
omg this has to be the best Trek story of spock and jim i have EVER read!
Zuvios Gemini chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
My eyes were the size of dinner plates for most of the story. O_O
Milarca chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
That was no nice :')
Umbrae Calamitas chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
OMFG... could you please make this into a longer piece? I'm reading the whole Progression Series, but this piece alone... omg... it's so incredibly. So freaking incredible.

~ Umbrae Calamitas

Live long. Live well. Write. Read. Dream.
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