Reviews for The Monstrosity in Humanity
k1942 chapter 2 . 4/8
An amazing moment, at least from Rosalie's perspective. I would think!
k1942 chapter 1 . 4/8
My God! What a horrible, heartbreaking story! How brave and wise Bella turned out, in spite of all that was done to her. No wonder she knew Edward was no monster.
kacy.cook.52 chapter 2 . 6/11/2014
I'm going to pretend she doesn't have Renesmee at least when i'm thinking of this little 2 shot!
alexiana75 chapter 2 . 4/12/2014
Nice part, this Bella/Rose interaction. I will not say that your story is "wonderfull"...Who would, about such horrible events? But, your writing style IS wonderfull, and you did a very good job
LucyLovesForever chapter 2 . 11/1/2013
GOD THIS IS TERRIBLE! I WANT TO RIP OUT THE THROAT OF ANYONE WHO EVER DID THIS TO AN INNOCENT LITTLE GIRL! HOW CAN PEOPLE BE SO DISGUSTING?
xXxhurting-insidexXx chapter 2 . 9/23/2013
This Was Amazing .. I Loved It A Lot . Made Me Cry A Bit Too ..
WolfScale3857 chapter 2 . 7/6/2012
AMAZING! Love this Rosalie and Bella bit. Very heartfelt and you did a good job of getting the emotions of the characters across. 3
jus2read chapter 2 . 6/20/2012
WoW D beautifully detailed! Poor Bella \

xxx
Blueruby13 chapter 2 . 5/22/2012
Wow I'm honestly close if not in tears. But it's the truth about humans. You never know what goes on behind closed doors.
midnight-sun1918 chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
I would be really cool if you had all the cullens pov and their thoughts on bella's past.
Lee Ed chapter 2 . 1/12/2012
Hey! This plot is awesome! But in ch 1, you mentioned that Bella can't have children anymore. So in breaking dawn, how is she gonna have renessme?
lips-like-morphinee chapter 1 . 8/22/2011
The story, is amazingly written and heartbreaking, but you need to break those huge paragraphs up cause if you don't it's pretty impossible to read and very frustrating.

This really is a good story though.

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Words-Of-A-Fallen-Angel chapter 2 . 7/18/2011
All I can say is wow.

These two chapters have so much raw emotion behind them. You're a brilliant writer, albeit with a few paragraphing issues, but your wording and descriptions are amazing.

Brilliant work.

!x~Frankie~x!
mental.imaginative.crazy.epic chapter 2 . 7/15/2011
this is a good, if sad fanfic, its an interesting angle, and i want to read more, so pleas eupdate it and keep writing, ask in an a/n fo ideas if u need any ;)
Anon chapter 1 . 7/2/2011
While I feel so badly for Bella, I highly disagree with her choice in letting those bastard mother fuckers go with only jail time. They deserve to be ripped limb from limb and have their dicks ripped slowly and painfully from them. She is too fucking selfless! If I were her I would have left to livewith Charlie after the first fucker. Your Renee doesn't deserve Bella and Bella shouldn't have had to protect or deal with that.
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