|Reviews for Laws of Attraction|
| ppp chapter 43 . 12/9/2013
I feel like the sequal will never come. I hope it does. I loved this. I almost didnt read because of some of the other, angry, reviews. Im glad I did. Even if there is no sequel I think people can carry it on in their heads. Its not a deffinitive end. Neither of them are that strong. I loved reading it. If you are looking at reviews deciding whether to give it a go or not - do!
| ppp chapter 18 . 12/6/2013
Im going to review properly when this is finished but just wanted to say; a) your writing is great and even though the slow build killed/is killing me I still love the story, and b) I have had 'whats up with that?!' stuck in my head all day because of your A/N lol
| JMN322 chapter 43 . 2/22/2013
Please write the sequel! I very much enjoyed reading this story. Very well written, and I especially appreciated the lack of either grammatical or spelling mistakes. My own bias I know, but I enjoy reading so much more when I am not distracted by those kinds of errors. I'm in heaven when I can just enjoy the story. THANK YOU!
| ttandme69 chapter 43 . 2/15/2013
Wow...good story..still has a way to go. Did not see the end as written. Thanks, Lisa
| Tiffanyfrench chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
I have read this twice and am on my third time around I am in love with the whole story line super amazing writing.
| Tiffanyfrench chapter 43 . 1/3/2013
This was the best writing I have had the pleasure to read. I can not say enough I was completely impressed and over come with emotion threw this whole story. I want to thank you for writing it and putting so much time and effort into it was a complete joy to read and will read it again just because it was so amazing.
| KOTEHOK chapter 43 . 11/16/2012
Just finished reading this and could hardly put it down. You did a great job, making it come to life. You made me laugh outlod, cringe at the appropriate moments and aroused for more than half the time.
Thank you so much for a brilliant read and please do not leave it at this - I very much look forward to the sequel.
| Poweradeblue chapter 43 . 11/4/2012
I just read the story again, it was my third time and I'm still in awe how good it is. I really hope that the sequel will be coming soon.
Best wishes, Undine.
| Ithnkivbrokenit chapter 43 . 9/29/2012
I must confess, I too thought the ending a little abrupt.
This has been by far my favourite B/S fic and will continue to be one of the best fan works I have ever read.
What attracted me to it initially was the quality of your writing and the illicit nature of their affair. It felt like it could happen for them that way.
I have enjoyed many of the chapters but particularly the earlier ones when it felt like you were most committed. There was a long break but I was so happy that you had decided to continue.
Anyway it's your fault that I hate the ending- because this is one fic I truly never wanted to end.
I hope Major Crimes has invigorated your muse as I would love to read more from you soon.
This is the longest review I have ever written (its tough to type on an iPhone! Autocorrect is unpredictable to say the least)
That is all
| Guest chapter 43 . 9/20/2012
Wow! What a story! I loved the begining and how Brenda tried to identify her feelings and figure out what they were and what they meant. A hot a spicy story. Thank you for all the time and effort for writing and sharing. I look forward to more.
| The Watcher chapter 43 . 9/18/2012
Well, that was...unexpected.
Not particularly welcome either.
Sorry if this sounds harsh, but it seems you built up the story to the point that a lot of people, them, invested enought time to read it all, review, favourite and follow your work, for you to then get tired of it and toss it in, with an obviously thrown together, weak and cop out ending.
Poor work Major Roon, sorry if it sounds harsh, but it's a very dissapointing way to end a great story, because you couldn't be bothered bringing it to a proper ending.
I'll watch for your next story, but perhaps you should stick to shorter ones if you can't be bothered seeing them all the way through.
| moxcar2010 chapter 43 . 9/18/2012
What an amazing ride. I'll miss it but I'm so looking forward to the new story. Loved that you ended with Sharon's POV
| crASHed chapter 43 . 9/18/2012
Wow. I do love this story, but this chapter really made me not like Brenda too much. I was shocked when I saw it was over, and where you ended it. The only reason I am not putting a curse on you is your author's note and the thought of a sequel. Seriously, this is awesome and I am delighted that you continue. I also hope that the ending of your sequel is, uh, more of the happy variety, since I am sort of a sucker for happy endings. Good work and thank you for sharing.
| monkeytoez17 chapter 43 . 9/18/2012
Thanks so much for this story, and thank you for getting Sharon to a place where she's starting to accept herself. I'm looking forward to your next story!
| authorjazmyne chapter 43 . 9/18/2012
That moment when Sharon tells her it's over and you scroll down too far and you already see the words "The End"... I wanted to freaking cry.
This was one of the best S/B stories I've ever read, long, but amazing. It didn't end how I was expecting, but I'm glad there will be a squeal.
This story was like one of those dramatic roller coasters that I usually can't read, but this was strangely addictive. I loved how you portrayed both characters. And even though I wasn't expecting the ending to be like that, I actually liked how you ended it.
Keep up the good work. :)