Reviews for Complete Control
rukiCoookies chapter 1 . 4/26/2014
Be careful using english language because many people can't speak indonesia ... Cerita yg bagus ...:)
Guest chapter 1 . 1/28/2014
You ahould write more into this and add more on how ichigo got so obediante. Maybe something to do with lemon and hypnotisim.
MidnightEden234 chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
This is just perfect! I still wish there was more, but leaving it at this will be fine :D
OptionalPrincess chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
this is great :)
CavaraSalvor chapter 1 . 9/8/2013
Rukia, you are completely correct. You are screwed
Demongirl808 chapter 1 . 2/6/2013
Make a PRECEAL!
Rin uchiha chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
WOW! ILOVEIT
jessica chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
ooooooo more more
Jamaican Skull chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
Awesome!
blackblooddoomwolf chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
...I know it may have not been intended to be dark but that was really dark...I liked it
darkangel1992 chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
Damn! I hate that this is a one shot because it's really good and I would love to see more with it ( that is why I'll subscribe just in case ;) )
AnjoRemix chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
omg O.O scary yet it's got me jumping in my seat for 'more' of this story! sadly it's a one-shot... but anyways! damn gatta find more stories like these XD 3
Aisilinn chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
YOU SHOULD MAKE THIS INTO A MULTICHAPTER. ITS VERY GOOD. SORRY FOR THE CAPS, I JUST LIKE THEM
AlarataraWitchIce chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
I think you should continue this into a full-length story; 800-something words isn't enough to do this.

But it was extremely well-written and I like the concept. I think you did a very good job, but I want more ;) M.M.
FantasyWriter5713161719 chapter 1 . 6/25/2011
Yes, they were all screwed because of all the bloodloss caused by watching Ichigo make out with himself.
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