|Reviews for who is sakuno|
| asuna11 chapter 8 . 4/19/2013
I'll wait and pray for your grandmother
| michelle88222 chapter 8 . 4/8/2013
:'( STAY STRONG! I'm sure she'll love to see you and it's only normal that you spend more time with her.
| Ayuma-chan chapter 8 . 4/7/2013
Oh wow hope your grandma gets better.
| Hinate chapter 2 . 3/29/2013
| Ayuma-chan chapter 7 . 3/15/2013
Dang best of luck I would like to be but I have like 1 story I need to post more chapters for 1 story I made for my friend didn't know how to end the story, she hatted the way I ended it so she has me to make another chapter plus 3 more stories I need to finish writing so yeah I got a lot my self or I would be happy to help. But if you don't mind a few helps here and there and some ideas then im your helper just PM me and I'll help!
| Deathly Jester chapter 8 . 3/13/2013
If you'd like, I can beta for you. ]
| whitelily chapter 6 . 11/11/2011
great story i love this story
| Shunrei Ryuzaki chapter 7 . 6/26/2011
too much error, the scenes are less detailed. You should find a beta reader to help you. Keep on writing to improve your writing skills.
| Devoid Of Color chapter 5 . 2/6/2011
Oh flip I love this and the show NCIS and when they go to the NCIS place don't you DARE FORGET Abby!
This message will blow up in...well...now.
| Shunrei Ryuzaki chapter 1 . 1/13/2011
i've just read you fic after you send me an pm. I think you must practice your spellings, i guess. I dont want to be mean but a good story written in a well spelling inspite of grammatical errors is still acceptable. The story seems nice but some kinda need some cohesion. Keep on writing! You could do better in the future if you would just go on writing and learning. n_n
p.s thanks for liking my story "too close, yet too far and im just here to support you just pm me if you have new fic
| Anon chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
Learn how to spell and use grammar.
| Crazy For Mac-A-Damian Nutz chapter 2 . 11/23/2010
Need more practice on this. Please check spelling next time. And re-read theme just in case you left something out or spelling errors.
I think it was an ook story.