what the actual fuck! thats sick! i absolutely love it. So original and well written. It's like finding a hidden treasure where you thought is only yaoi shit written by disturbed twelve-year-olds.

Wow! Intreasting I am not sure if he is dreaming in which world.

Whoa freaky. Well written and interresting. but freaky.

Certainly made me think! Good job!

Lovely! Well-written and an interesting one-shot with Kakashi. Has a somewhat plausible alternate world flip-flop via dreams that should feel cliche, but is actually refreshing :D

Good job!

... I approve of your pleasantly flowing mindscrew.

Excellently written and explained

ok. i really like this story. i think its sooo cool! i think it would be so awesome if you were to wright another chapter! but what you have now is really really good :)

Very interesting story. Well written.

Interesting story. I came away thinking that both are reality and that Kakashi's mind/spirit wavers between the two, spending time in one world while he's asleep in the other.

i speculate both realities are real but the reality that the non-naruto-world is could be a "primary world" and the Naruto world is like a secondary world... er, yeah... confusing.

Interesting fanfic.

That, I will say is a pretty good short story. IT could be seen as an physch ward patient who can't tell reality from dream, or a war torn warrior who has his own little relaxing fantasy

demn amazing story no realy i love your wokr keep it up

Why hasn't this gotten more reviews. Really good and very haunting and an incredible amount of detail in the "real world" as how someone like Kakashi would be percieved i.e. albino. The answer I think goes is that both lives are real and that neither are.