|Reviews for Bastard Prince|
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/6
plz make this story a book plz I will by it if you do
| Evan chapter 3 . 1/20
I honestly fell in love with this story and I entirely depressed that you have given it away... You wrote it with a lot of feeling and made me feel polar opposite emotions at the same time. You have inspired me to write a story about a world like knockturn alley and if I do folloe through with a solid chapter of it, I promise, ill send you an update review with the link tothe story. :") Ill read your other book soon :"3 I hope youre proud of this work and how it touched manys hearts, thrilled minds, nd races the imagination. Thank you for sharing such a precious gift with the world. Thank you for writing a literary work that tantaslized my mind and forced me to endlessly read it throughout the night enjoying every single letter read. Thank you for everything and although I wish you were still writing this, thank you fo not completely abandoning this story and passing the baton . :") This book will always be in my heart.
a person whose heart you have forever captured with your writing alone. Xxx
| FightsWithBears chapter 3 . 12/21/2014
| Daddymoopoo chapter 3 . 11/10/2014
I really like this fanfic and I can understand what you mean when you say a character is not who you fell they are supposed to be. Every character has a different personality and it is the writers job to convey this. If this is how you feel about this and have not had any other offers then I would be glad to take over for you and see Tobias continue on his journey. Just pm me and I'll try to respond. Or you can e-mail me at
Good luck in any other opportunities that befall you and thank you for sharing this fanfic.
| Mistress Steff chapter 2 . 10/2/2014
Why did you stop? Are you going to continue this fic? Please do!
| ianbrandt300 chapter 3 . 9/20/2014
Love this story. Plz update
| Heksy chapter 3 . 9/17/2014
Just great. Couldn't you have put ABANDONED in the summary? What's the point in reading a fic, if there's no end? *stomps off in a huff*
| Kay chapter 1 . 8/11/2014
This is an awesome story. It would be great if you can finish it. Your characters are interesting, the premise is wonderful, and your writing is engaging. I tried looking at your other web page, but it looks like it hasn't been update recently. I hope you're OK...just too busy with life. However, if you start writing again, I for one, will read.
| Wildrop chapter 3 . 7/10/2014
This story has been awesome. Thank you so much for writing it!
| WingedEagle chapter 1 . 3/27/2014
Just wanted to let you know I thought this was great, and I'm really sad I didn't come across it earlier and that's its not finished either on your site or forgottenellipses site. I'm off to read your Trains of Thought site now!
| LadyVukavo chapter 3 . 3/24/2014
Hey, dunno if you know it but I think you should redo the update here as ForgottenEllipses has the story same length as your own and saying Up for Adoption in the summary...
Otherwise, this is an awesome story, very well written. Harry's responses to what's going on was quite in character as was Snape becoming a bastard. Lol I enjopy the stories where Harry finds out Snape is his father but a lot of them seem unrealistic personality wise
| Enc-Chance chapter 3 . 2/14/2014
I'm Dying! I swear, I am addicted to this story...so I went to find the one who adopted the story, and she's putting it up for adoption! With absolutely no updates since the last chapter you wrote. I have to know what happens when they see the check up; my imagination is driving me crazy with all of the possibilities! I'm not asking you to continue to write this fanfic, if your muse is indeed gone, but could you please mail one of the other authors who wanted to adopt this fic? Please?
Many wishes to your well being and success,
| Kittens Kat chapter 3 . 1/11/2014
I REALLY WILL MISS YOU WRITING THIS STORY! YOU DID AN AMAZING JOB! THANK YOU!
| MISSISSIPPI -'- TROJAN chapter 3 . 12/10/2013
Please update soon!
| hypercell chapter 3 . 11/17/2013
I am so angry at you. I can't even expresse my anger to you, but let ,e tell I had to wait an entire night to write this so I could calm down. When I decided to read outcasts alley I specifically picked a story that was complete. And guess what? I fell in love. It's amazing and I love it and I want to see the scene with Lucius and everything and please please please think about taking up this story because the person you chose to continue abandoned it without even writing a new chapter!