Just to point out: doesn't Mai's reaction to this imply that if Naru had a completely non-paranormal accident, got amnesia, and forgot her that she'd be like "well screw you then," too?

There are great things about this story, but does EVERYONE have to be in love with Mai? Lin COULD just love her like a brother. Gene, too.

The paranormal stuff you wrote is really good. But I keep getting frustrated by Mai being in the limelight-even being a model in the states which is SO OOC in a way that's hard not to be kind of aggravated by.

Loved it! I need more!

Woah. I so did not expect that lemon at the end! But damn was that good! I loved all of it! I know this story is years old now, but you still deserve some kudos for that. Well done.

I am genuinely sad that she didnt end up with Lin, but I still love Mai/Naru! Please make a story of Lin and Mai!

This is one of my favorite fanfics of all time. I read it at least once every couple of weeks. Keep up the amazing work ️

omg sequel please! so amazing!

oh my god.. please do a sequel, pretty please with a cherry on top

please do a sequel! i love this fic ive read it so many times. i love assertive and powerful mai and i love how you softened naru but kept who he is. some authors take it too far. plus so steamy. i cant get enough mai/naru

I really like the story so far, but the only thing I have a bit of problem with was how amnesiac Naru was acting in-your-face high and mighty. I can't really see him saying, "Do you have any idea who I am" to anyone. I think he would have just ignored or looked condescendingly on them. But other than that, I am loving it so far! Excellent story! I hope there's more smut in the coming chapters :P

GET A FUCKING SEQUEL~ I WANT MORE~

Definitely one of the best Ghost Hunt stories I've ever read! Super well written and I love the way you wrote the characters! Desperately hoping for a sequel!

I loved this story so much! The plot was incredible, and it was really well-written! Crossing my fingers for a sequel sometime soon!

I just made an account but i commented on this story before, and i just wanted to say once again that your story is amazing! I hope there will be a sequel coming up!

THERE HAS TO BE A SEQUELLLL. THE NEXT CASE SOUNDS PRETTY INTERESTING AND THIS IS ON TOP OF MY LIST AS THE PERFECT FANFICTION BECAUSE ITS NOT TOO FAST AND ITS JUST PERFECTTTTTTTT