Reviews for Home Coming Case
HunnyBunnyChan chapter 14 . 10/28/2010
OMG is he going to get his memory back? He better. ahaha empty threats; i love your writing too much. But seriously; is he going to get it back?
AKEMI SHIKON chapter 14 . 10/27/2010
I'm not frustrated at all! :D this was such an amazing twist, I loved it! And now we know what heck has been going on behind the scenes ;) Ha ha, I think that twist was put in so certain people can do a certain tango:p :D Although, I really hope he spontaneously recovers his memory eventually :p so I have seen five episodes so far and I just found out that there is reading material too :o so now I sometime have to start that ;p I really like the way you wrote the characters (as previously stated) and now that I have something to compare them too..well, it's all very awesome!

As always, I eagerly await your next update (this story deserves more reviews and love than it has) TTFN!
Holmesz chapter 13 . 10/27/2010
Oh my god, oh my god, oh my god! This story is awsome and I am hocked on it! Poor Naru, his is losing his mind and does anyone feel sorry for Lin! Ah!

Please update soon.
BloodyXan-Xan chapter 13 . 10/26/2010
Omg poor Mai-chan that son of a gun owner, n my god naru is to adorable when he is worried for mai, i loved it especially the whole coming from lin's pov so yeah awsome, hope u can update it soon
tentsubasa chapter 13 . 10/26/2010
This is really interesting. I hope they can get her out of her coma soon. I look forward to your next update.
HunnyBunnyChan chapter 13 . 10/25/2010
ooooooooh :) please update soon!
AKEMI SHIKON chapter 13 . 10/25/2010
so I started this fic 30 mins. ago and I love it! :D You're doing such a great job with it. Your characters are developing nicely and it looks like you know them like the back of your hand which is another plus :) Everything is well organized too ;) Now I need to actually see the show so I can compare and contrast your characters to the originals since I've never seen Ghost Hunt before. Keep up the good work! :D
Skye.Swirl chapter 13 . 10/25/2010
3 Reviews in 1 day!

Lin's POV that's a first (I think :P!)

Blueprints - CHECK!
Pissed-off Naru - CHECK!
Unconscious owner - CHECK!
Banished evil Doc Benton - CHECK!
Mai in a coma - CHE- Wait WHAT?
Mai in a coma that is NOT good!
Naru save her, help her DO SOMETHING!

Can't wait for the next Chapter!

P.S- Happy Moving! Hope everything gets there Okay! And if you sense something weird... Like a poltergeist maybe Don't hesitate to call SPR!
I'm their newest trainee *nods* *nods* yup!
Believe it or not I am spiritually sensible :P!

Skye.Swirl chapter 12 . 10/25/2010
I present to you Mina the magnificent!
*croud cheers*

Thank you Thank you!


They were soo close!

*gasp* The client is a BAD PERSON?
I sorta had thought about it but i thought it would be like an employee NOT the owner!
She's a BAD BAD person threatening Naru with Mai! Hmph! Tsk tsk!

You Go Naru! Getting into Mai's dream! Come on you can find her *clap* *clap* *clap* *clap* Come on you can find her *clap* *clap* *clap* *clap*!

Don't worry Mai he will save you!

Love u allz!

Skye.Swirl chapter 11 . 10/25/2010

Naru is soo cute when he is trying (and failing) to deny that he is jelous!
Mai TRIES not to be a sucker for Naru's kisses (and same as Naru trying to hide his jelousy, she fails ;P!)

Mina will be back momentarily she has an important appointment with Doc Benton!

Damn *hits* you *hits* Doc *hits* Benton *hits* leave *hits* Mai *hits* alone!

Okay, I fell better now!
That stupid Doc Benton drugging Mai and taking he hostage ! Hmph!

Jade Starlight chapter 13 . 10/25/2010
I really enjoyed this chapter with a look at Lin's side of things and finally learning why Mai had left exactly. Awesome job on this!
welistened chapter 13 . 10/25/2010
AHH! You are a horrible person, I hope you know. (Not really, but you know what I'm saying.) What a horrible cliff hanger! So cruel... *sobs*
Tsukiyomi Macey chapter 13 . 10/25/2010
Good chapter! Favorite ghost hunt fanfic so far! Haha can't wait to see what happens next!
BloodyXan-Xan chapter 12 . 10/25/2010
Omg this was such a shocking n sad chappy i feel like i could cry the drama n the intensity is perfect,loved it n hope u can update it soon
Ilovemallows chapter 12 . 10/25/2010
keep up the good work! plsss update real soon
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