Reviews for Rising of the Dark
kawii inc chapter 8 . 7/2
chrono crusader
shade chapter 11 . 7/1
this is really cool, I'd certainly like to read more of this and I'm looking forward to more chapters if they come.
Guest chapter 11 . 5/16
cool
reviewer chapter 11 . 3/21
lovely chapter
lord-kurama chapter 11 . 3/19
Nice mate, I quite liked your story...
Zecht chapter 11 . 2/14
great story. Shame it's abandoned
Rongis chapter 2 . 2/3
And this is the moment i say f.u.c.k. your fanfic and go to read something else that doesn't refers to a child as an object biatch
Sheya chapter 11 . 1/31
I hope you will continue this. And I hope your studies are going well.
nanayoung chapter 11 . 1/18
I believe that things are going a bit too quickly. It's a good idea, but you haven't really managed to flesh out the characters. I still have little idea of what Hagwin and Celia are like as people. They just seem like people that Naruto brings along and calls them precious. We never really see why they call each other great friends, or why they're willing to turn their backs on their culture for each other. Swearing loyalty over alcohol and having a few battles with each other is not enough to convince me. True, there were a great many time skips in between, but that only means that you wasted that amount of character development your characters could have been put through. We never got to see any of it, see Hagwin and Celia overcome their hatred of each other in order to become friends. We never got to see Naruto slowly trust the two over time. We never got to see them develop a bond and over come emotional hardships. Hell, we barely saw them have fun with each other. It's too focused on Naruto and how powerful he is.
Vipcalleo chapter 11 . 1/16
Mmmmmmmmmoooooooorrrrrrrrreeeeee ples ples ples :D
kage88 chapter 11 . 1/12
love it
kage88 chapter 10 . 1/12
interesting
kage88 chapter 8 . 1/12
i like it can not await to read more
GreatDerpression chapter 1 . 12/7/2014
Great story, and from what i can tell he has been on some time after march 29 2014 since he Favorited a story that was published on that date.
6453101 chapter 10 . 11/23/2014
Please, please, PLEASE update one of your stories they are exellent stories and you havent updated for a year almost two for the latest, i understand if your busy with college or a job but cmon, someone with your talent comes around rarly
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