|Reviews for Relative Truth|
| The Keet chapter 5 . 3/11/2002
Lo, it's me Magik! )I absolutely adored your 5th chapter! I can just imagine the scene with Darth Vader and Luke Skywalker replaced by Kaito and Shinichi. *thinks* Kaito: "Shinichi... *heavy breathing* I am... YOUR BROTHER!" Shinichi: "NOOOOOOOOOO!" ... Heh heh heh... Anyways, I'll be looking forward to the 6th chapter! You're one of the best writers I have ever been graced with the honor to read their fic! *worship worship* No doubt I'll be obsessed with this chapter for a few YEARS. By the way, I'm glad you liked the picture I sent you, I'm gonna work on some more once spring break kicks in and this social studies project is finished. Went to your site too, but do you have a Conan/Kaito section? 'Cause if you do, I can't find it. Well, I love your story, keep on working! By the way, I think I'm going to go prod Hell's Hauntress (see the incrediblely long review below) to write her own fic now! See ya! (And expct more pics soon!)
From, a very hyper Maigk-chan )
| Hakaisha chapter 5 . 3/11/2002
O_O *jaw drops through the floor* Oh. My. Gosh. It should be a crime to write this good. Good lord. No, wait, scratch that. If it WAS a crime then I can't read this. Never mind.
Ok, I am flat-out shocked from this, but...I have tons of things to say, so if you're reading this...well, expect a long review.
First off...WHERE IN THE WORLD DID YOU LEARN TO WRITE LIKE THIS? Thanks to your fic and the wheedling (if it could be CALLED that) from my friend Magik (who, I noticed, hasn't reviewed this yet...but I'm sure I'll get an earful from her about this once she does), I am now officially obsessed with Magic Kaitou and Detective Conan. And it's all your fault! P
Ok, I'm just kidding. _ It takes a lot to get me obsessed onto something, and REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY good fanfiction (namely, yours) usually does the trick...with some convincing from fellow anime nuts, of course. ;-) I'm still squealing over this...in fact, it may be even called SQUEAKING. I don't have enough voice left in me to SQUEAL; I'm so shocked by this fic. This is so damn good it isn't even funny. Seriously, no BS at all. If I were Magik (who is a fantastic artist - don't tell her I said that, she hates compliments and flattery, even if it's true - according to her, she has sent you some fanart for the first chapter that you extrememly liked) I would be rush emailing (is that even a correct term?) fanart to you. Unfortunately, I can't. You don't want to see MY art, trust me. I can even mess up on drawing STICK FIGURES...-_- Shows how much 'artistic talent' I have, doesn't it? *sweatdrop*
Anyway, this review isn't about me. It's about your awesome fic. I say that the 'secret' really explains a lot of things, right down to the piercing blue eyes and wild-ish brown hair that Kaito and Shinichi share. Not to mention their intellect. Everybody is perfectly in character, even Ai (I love that sarcastic attitude _), but...just as a MERE suggestion...since you're also telling the tale from Kaito's POV once in a while, could you please include Aoko Nakamouri? I know she isn't a main character and all, but mention her, at least...S
Anyhow. Have I rambled enough yet? Probably. *looks at length of review* Now, that wasn't so bad, was it? *grin* Although...since I'm a newbie to this fandom I'm not really sure...but is it supposed to be the Black Organization or Black Syndicate? I had NEVER gotten that straight.
Oooh...I'm at a loss for words. Just PLEASE, Becky, WRITE MORE! I'm begging you! I can tell I'll be reading this chapter for AT LEAST 5 more times by the time you post the next chapter...officially obsessed, I tell you...and darn proud of it! _
Awesome work! ;-)
Hauntress-chan [and a very obsessed one, too!]
| jaded-mushroom chapter 5 . 3/11/2002
T.T evil becky...NEXT CHAP SOON OR ELSE!
| CSakuraS chapter 5 . 3/11/2002
Wow. That was...well...it was...shocking.
For some reason I'm getting the creeps from this whole "secret", though it would certainly explain a LOT of things. I wonder if I'll ever look at Yuusaku the same way again...
| Icka M. Chif chapter 5 . 3/11/2002
Shin'ichi... Kuroba? Yuusaku was the Kaito Kid? Shin'ichi and Kaitou are related? *ponders*
This would mean Shin'ichi and Kaitou either Half-brothers, which means that Yuusaku was cheating on Yukiko, or was cheating on Kaitou's Mom... (bad Yuusaku!) Or they're Twins and one of them is being raised by their non-biological Mother... Or Kaitou's Dad and Shin'ichi's Dad were siblings that alternated being the original Kaito Kid until Kaitou's Dad was shot sending Yuusaku into hiding, which would make Kaitou and Shin'ichi cousins... Or I could be waaaaaaaaay off.
*pounds head on desk* dammit, I'm gonna be pondering this the rest of the day. Or until you post the next chapter. ;}
Any way you look at it, Shin'ichi's not gonna be very happy the next time Yuusake shows up. Heh. *grin*
-ICKA! the IMP
| Apparition chapter 5 . 3/11/2002
Becky-sama, who are you? You are really scaring me with the out-of-this-earth quality and writing -this- fast! Now I can't get enough so please release your chapters soon. I'm really running out of what to say... I will worship you if you want... Well, maybe not THAT but it's pretty damn close.
Just one very small remark, Shin'ichi did sleep in his home after the Tropical Land day.. I don't want to spoil anything but it's in manga 26 and isn't he rich enough to buy things without getting in summer jobs?
| tdei chapter 5 . 3/10/2002
** WAIIIIIIIIIIII! THIS IS THE COOLEST FIC I'VE HAD THE PLEASURE OF READING FOR A LOOOOOONG WHILE! I swear to the highest truth! NONE make me BEG for the next part like yours does! ::CLINGS HARDER THAN A LEECH:: PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT PART! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEEAAAAAAAAAAAASE- I'M BRIBING YOU! ::grovels shamelessly::
| mikaii chapter 4 . 3/10/2002
ah really nice. i wonder watz gonna happen to kudo. THe story iz turnin out really nice iz really great
| Anaxo chapter 4 . 3/9/2002
Wow, this chapter was cool! Very realistically written, and very edge-of-the-seat tension too. Felt just like watching a version of Mission: Impossible, although not quite as high-tech. _-
| humaniod chapter 4 . 3/9/2002
EXRTREMELY good! wow, one of the best conan fan fic I've read, I haven't seen any bloopers, pretty good. Although I don't get teh glow in the dark powder with black light part. How does that work? Would you be nice enough to mail me the explaination? It's been bugging me for . thank you. and once again, reeally good fic
| kluanar chapter 4 . 3/8/2002
COOL! Wow! Next chapter please!
| The Keet chapter 1 . 3/8/2002
HOW COULD YOU? Now I'm so obsessed with your fic I can't stop thinking about it! I'm addicted I tell you! I just read it again for the 5th time today! Plus, now all my doodling and drawings are of illustrations of your fic! (hint: expect some fanart to be headed your way) I'm dying here!
From, a heavily addicted Magik-chan
| Apparition chapter 4 . 3/8/2002
Good? This is quiet awesome! Sneaking missions with adrenalin-effervescent action, yay, it is like playing Metal Gear with Conan instead of Snake. Good job and poor Kaito Kid for not getting the jewel. But now, you've got me obsessed so I scream "More.. MORE!"
| Hakaisha chapter 4 . 3/7/2002
Lord, that was just too goddamn good for words! you deserve WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY more than just 21 reviews (or 22, after mine).
I have NEVER seen a fic with this much detail. I don't know how good of a review I can write, considering my friend Tenshi/Magik [who, by the way, flat-out WOULD NOT stop squealing about your fic until I read it ;-)] only got me obsessed into Kaito/Conan a VERY short while ago (only a few days ago, to be precise), but this was flat-out WICKED. Man, you write one SWEET fic. I was panicking when Shinichi/Conan tripped those alarms...ooooh, his panic was right on the dot! And that second alarm...and then his running-in-sheer-terror thing nearly made me fall off my chair! Of course, it was understandable...
This fic, in MY book, ranks with the best of the best, and I'm serious. Characterization, plot, emotions are all right on the mark...you should be darn proud of yourself, Becky Tailweaver. You deserve it.
I'll be checking this VEEEEEERY often for updates...hint hint: update quickly! _
| jaded-mushroom chapter 4 . 3/7/2002
DIE DIE DIE WHERE THE HELL IS THE NEXT CHAPTER?