|Reviews for Demon Lord of the West|
| KyuubiMakai009 chapter 11 . 6/11
Kikyō and Yura, man. Maybe throw in Ayame the Wolf Demoness of the Northern Tribe, too—you know, the wolf girl who was betrothed to Kōga from the start.
| acy chapter 12 . 10/21/2015
when will you start updating again, this is a great story
| kingleochuenchom16 chapter 12 . 10/17/2015
I'm really happy for you hope your job goes will, i can't wait for the next update it was really interesting i really enjoyed it thank you.
| your kidney 4lunch '3 chapter 6 . 8/20/2015
Can i be your beta, i really love this story and i just REALLY REALLY want to fix it up for you. You've got a great fic going but i feel like with a bit of repair it could get soooo much more love.
| ortizale317 chapter 12 . 7/24/2015
I would like to see naruto in a pairing with kikyo
| birdkamp chapter 2 . 7/10/2015
that ok job is first stories are for later this is a good story
| SolarisAce chapter 11 . 6/8/2015
I must say: I've never been a real fan of crossover fics. Having said that, I do believe that what's happened here so far has been an interesting concept-not the best, but better than several other crossovers I've read.
Thus far, my only real gripes have been that with regards to spelling. There are a few things which I did not feel came across clearly in previous chapters, however. Chiefly, what form of Naruto that Kikyo saw in visions, and which form she was actually looking at.
Plus, I don't think that Kyuubi has gotten enough attention in this story so far. I was half expecting Naruto to just go all-out on Naraku with his power. Seriously, I'm pretty sure Naruto could have gone Nine-Tails and Shoryuken Punched the CRAP out of Naraku. But then again, it just wouldn't be that interesting.
Still, I'm interested in seeing what happens next.
| puppy13 chapter 12 . 6/6/2015
| Guest chapter 11 . 3/4/2015
Kikyo for pairing
| ortizale317 chapter 11 . 11/30/2014
I think that there is hope for your story
So update please.
| genesicgaogaigarvsgodgundam chapter 1 . 11/19/2014
| Guest chapter 11 . 8/23/2014
Please update this epic story soon
| killer4853 chapter 1 . 7/12/2014
| Eion1783 chapter 11 . 5/15/2014
i wonder what naruto's planning? hope you'll post chapter 12 soon
| kingrobert84 chapter 11 . 2/10/2014
doin awesome man whens update? and that is a though question