|Reviews for No Girls Allowed|
| Lady Nara chapter 29 . 9/2
I adore everything about this. You have converted me to Junichi (who knew?), and I've enjoyed every second of the Tai-centrism. Who wouldn't fall in love after reading this fic? It's fun to see the way you're resolving the flash-forward at the end of the series with everything that went before. I have so many new head canons. And I LOVE that Tai has two partners now, holy crap. Poor BlackWarGreymon deserves to have those bonds. Can't wait to see what happens next!
| Neko Haruko chapter 27 . 5/28
| EJR HorseLady chapter 29 . 5/1
I love the bonding between BWG and Tai. Can you please have BWG realise that Tai was just as much a unwilling victim as he was in the bonding, and not be too mad at Tai. He can be as mad as he wants for WG forcing the bond though.
| The Quiet Samurai chapter 29 . 4/12
Damn, this is getting intense. (Not that it wasn't before. ;) ) I sort of have this theory that BlackWarGreymon will become Jun's partner somehow. I hope she'll be in the next chapter! And yes, I did think Tai was the kid- mostly because the digimon was an Agumon. Just because. But since their actual meeting was different, it was most likely some kid based off of Tai because it was BWG's dream.
I also like the idea of Matt writing Butterfly. :D
Hope the next chapter comes soon!
| Guest chapter 29 . 4/9
So wow, that was a chapter. I'm glad you're finally getting into the endgame arc for this story and I'm VERY excited to see how it all ends.
By the way, I found an small error. In chapter 23, BWG tells Agumon "You who were hatched from a Digi-Egg, nurtured in Primary Village" but in this chapter he doesn't have any knowledge of Primary Village.
I don't know if if this is going where I think it's going, but I just wanna say that it wasn't very clear at the end there what Wargreymon did. Did he completely sever the bond and put a new one in its place? Or did he just loosen it to allow another to join their circle? I'd like to believe it's the latter, since Tai technically already kind of did something similar already when he began his relationship with Jun and now it's Agumon's turn. I assume you'll just explain it in the next chapter?
| pikaree1 chapter 29 . 4/8
Tai and BlackWarGreymon's interactions... Awesomeness. Go Tai, you Greymon magnet. X3
OH MY GOD BLACKWARGREYMON IS TAI'S SON'S PARTNER THAT WOULD BE SO FREAKING PERFECT I DON'T EVEN HOW DO YOU YOU ARE AWESOME THAT IS THE END OF THIS DISCUSSION.
HE'S HUNGRY! SOMEONE GET A CAMERA AND A BOATLOAD OF TSUKIMI UDON! But seriously. I laughed hysterically everytime BlackWarGreymon's stomach rumbled. And when the Digidestined finally caught up at the vending machines. And you incorporated the opening! Nice! I am in full support of that headcanon if you are in need of numbers. :3
... I hate you and love you at the same time. It's an odd feeling. YOU'RE SUCH A GREAT WRITER AND THEN YOU ARTFULLY STOPPED AT A CLIFFHANGER QAQ WHY, AGUMON YOU LITTLE FOOL, WHY DID YOU THINK THAT WOULD WORK
| pikaree1 chapter 28 . 4/8
Cody. I need your mental image on tape to replay over and over in my mind, please.
"Great kid, good intentions, moral conscience too high, and puts too much faith in justice and truth." That about sums up Tai, yeah.
"Who's gonna rescue jerkface say what now?" Precisely, Davis.
... CLIFFIE QAQ
| pikaree1 chapter 27 . 4/8
... Can I wring that woman's neck? Jun and I can tag-team.
| pikaree1 chapter 26 . 4/8
Matt's desperate if he's willing to cover up his hair. But then again... He de-spiked it to become a star... ... RETURN OF THE GELLY SUPER SPIKE, LET'S GO!
I agree Jun... Though that might be because History's my worst subject...
RETURN OF THE HAIKU MASTER! BOO-YAH!
*sulks* Matt, you let me down...
Evil glinty glasses glare. Everyone, dive for cover!
Because he's too pitiful. And crazy awesome and awesomely crazy.
... *facepalms again* Tai.
| pikaree1 chapter 25 . 4/8
Goggle speech. XD
Yes, Tai. That was very weird. But do it anyway. After all, campfire's are fun! Jun can make tsukimi udon! She and Agumon can have in-law bonding time! It'll be awesome!
... Hey sci-fi freaks... The goggles are the sign of alien heroes!
... I say, might I borrow a copy of that yearbook? Or just the picture?
| pikaree1 chapter 23 . 4/8
XD Jun... I should really read more stories about her. Preferably with Tai in them, too. Though I doubt many will be as well-written as yours.
TANKMON CONVERSATION! XD
| Ricku28 chapter 29 . 3/30
... AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! TOO MUCH CLIFFHANGER! Please post a new chapter soon, I can't stand not knowing, and PLEASE keep BlackWarGreymon alive. PLEASE! Wow. Sorry for that, just, wow.
| pikaree1 chapter 22 . 3/24
RAMEN CART CHAAAAAAARGE! This explains his dream. Also, yay team noodle contenders. :D
Finally, a happy-ish ending-ish thing! :D
| pikaree1 chapter 21 . 3/23
1. I liked the interactions between Tai and Izzy this chapter.
2. I liked the soccer team's segment.
3. I liked the fact that Tai decided which way he's going to run screaming, because THAT IS A QUOTE THAT I AM GOING TO USE FOR THE REST OF MY LIFE BECAUSE IT IS SO AWESOME.
4. YOU ARE SUCH A GOOD WRITER.
...Kay, I'm done. :D
| Tintaglia chapter 29 . 3/19
Let's start this slightly long review then! First of all, my gosh I remember when this story was first published all those years ago, I'm quite happy to see it continued and develop with time. After rereading it for at least the second time as a refresher I've come to appreciate the little details added. Some lines, I will admit feel not cheesy per say (corny?) but I can imagine it canonically occurring in the dub version (I too am rather fond of it and have rematched it with my sister twice in the past year). While not a fan of poetry, Tai's haikus add a great dimension to his character, showing his maturity (and while not a fan of romance the one meant for Jun was sweet) but at the same time still displaying the child Tai viewers grew up with.
Shoot, before I go on a tangent, this chapter was (insert that hand emoji used to show something is just right). Rather true, Tai simply ends up getting hurt one time after another and reading this all in one go definitely highlighted how often Murphy's Law is out to get him. I empathize with Tai in regards to Plato, I find myself in a similar situation with Freud (but more on his psychodynamic approach) but at least there's no Agumon taking his words a tad too literally.
The dream portion caught me slightly off guard so the author's note was a nice touch regarding explanation, although I did have two interpretations of it regarding whether it was Tai or not. BlackWarGreymon, while not a particular enthusiastic fan of the second season (enjoyable none the less), was one of those memorable characters I wished had been explored more (maybe I just wanted him to have more screen time...) But yes too his interactions and dare one say bonding, with Tai! True, we conclude with one less BlackWarGreymon but the price was small for this chance (in my humble opinion).
There's so much more to discuss and say but this feels like quite a bit already. Can't wait to see how things will further progress and my many thanks for your continued work.