Reviews for Lonely Strangers
madmodgirl chapter 1 . 4/4/2012
Update please

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madmodgirl chapter 2 . 3/21/2012
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PirateNinjaV7 chapter 2 . 2/7/2012
It's great! Really love it! Can't wait to read more. One thing though... and yes, you may kill me afterwards. Just that if Sholeh is talking, she says alot at a time. Perhaps if you could shorten her sentences. But that's only my opinion, please don't stop because of it! It doesn't take away he awesomeness of you story!
Mhunter chapter 2 . 11/21/2011
This is Pretty good. Can't wait for the next chapter.
SOMETHING chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
UPDATE!
Holsta21 chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
next chapter soon pls can't wait to see what happens.
Hawthorn Tree chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
You need to update, I'm intrigued and waiting! This is a good story, though you haven't update for months...
Novella Vialli chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
update soon pls!
UnapologeticallyMe chapter 1 . 1/6/2011
I look forward to reading more of your story- there aren't many stories with Garsiv as the main character! :) Keep up the good writing!

Oh, and I think a couple of paragraphs were repeated, just in case you want to read over it and edit it if need be. Otherwise, great job! :D
julieakaweirdo chapter 1 . 10/2/2010
Nice story :) Hope you update soon..:D
drinksforthewholehouse chapter 1 . 9/25/2010
I like the 3rd person POV.

Fitst POV is a bit restricting in a sense.

I love it, well I love anything with Garsiv in it.

Just a couple of things, it's 'through' not 'threw'

"while she walked threw the strange/her way threw the camp"

In a firm tone that 'meant' buisness.

"firm tone that ment buisness"

and a couple of other spelling mistakes.

also, you seem to have repeated a section, from

"You are right, prince Garsiv doesn't learn from his mistakes"

Otherwise, I'm interested to know what will happen with the following chapters.