|Reviews for Godzilla Against King Kong|
| Godzilla lover and Kong hater chapter 1 . 12/8/2011
You and J Rust make sick with your Godzilla-hating and King Kong-loving shit! If I typed this fic, I'd make the Big G give Kong a taste of his own medicine 'cause I love reptiles more than mammals. Because of Kong and you dumb asses, you make me ashamed to be human! :(
"You think it's great what gorilla that gorilla did to the King of the Monsters? I'd feed to you to Godzilla if he's real. Hell, I"d love to see the Big G do to you what did to him."
| JJ Rust chapter 1 . 7/23/2011
You had some good battle segments here, especially with Kong swinging around the skyscraper and decking Godzilla. Good stuff. But a lot of the action dragged a bit because the sentences were too long and some of the descriptions of Godzilla were a bit flowery. Shorter sentences better convay the sense of action. On a good note, you had plenty of destruction, which is what you want in these things.
A couple typos I spotted: "jets path" should be "jet's path"
"foot ball" should be "football"
Keep on writing!