|Reviews for What Big Eyes You Have|
| Suchan and Twelve chapter 1 . 10/11/2010
I like the focus on his eyes. I know they're kind of a big deal and everyone makes use of them, but the specific focus is refreshing. Angstfest indeed. Love it.
"Never has there been a time that anyone has ever looked at Manfred and not have stared at his eyes." I did find this phrasing a bit confusing... but also I would like to let you know I feel tired and in a sort of mental float, so it seems to fit, in a way, in the way that it doesn't fit.
I don't know. I really liked this a lot.
| ShadowFan9001 chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
I like how Manfred sounds like somebody corrupted by his endowment instead of being someone wholly evil (as Jenny Nimmo makes him). And I like the Little Red Riding Hood references, they fit Manfred so nicely.
Hooray for angst stories! (-has finally taken the time to look up the word in the dictionary-) Keep on writing!