Reviews for Can I ask you something?
yui1808 chapter 1 . 1/17/2015
Thanks for sharing this story.
Supasoph chapter 1 . 2/8/2014
Could u make this a series?
alexade chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
Uh! I love the way you compare it!
DEPRCREW chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
Not Gonna lie the ending was great and I could actually see that happening between them when I was reading -Nica
Super fun. Lots of great emotions. -Maya
I had a lot reading it and if you were up for it would love to read more. Mira
It was totally believable that Helena would give up on Barb for Quinzel I mean she had odd sexual tension with both in the show -Mark
I loved how Barbara said she would follow Helena even if it meant her own death. -Mike
Liked the flow -Sage
I liked it a lot but I feel that Helena's sarcastic wit didn't real shine through all in all it was a good story.
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Bop fan chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
I like how u had helena address her feelings from a new angle, putting Barbara on the spot unknowingly. Follow up with the date?
Fivealpha chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
So very cute!
melborousse chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
This is really sweet, I especially like this part:

"Are you serious about moving on?" Barbara asked tentatively trying to make contact with Helena's eyes

"Yes" adamantly, refusing to meet Barbara's eyes.

"Why?" asked Barbara softly.

"I want you to be happy."

Barbara/Helena can be so angsty, sweet and romantic at the same time...*sighes*

Thanks for writing and sharing, I appreciate it. :)

Dee chapter 1 . 10/1/2010
Thanks for a very enjoyable short story. I like the way you portrayed these two characters. I'd love to read a sequel!

Dee. chapter 1 . 9/26/2010
Fantastic! Here's to hoping for a sequel.
GoddessAnjanee chapter 1 . 9/25/2010
loved it!

Your story held my attention from the beginning to the end.

Will you make a sequel to this story?