Reviews for The Breaking Point
macfvr13 chapter 6 . 10/2/2014
In this chapter after the haunted house part, you wrote "Christine kept her mouth shit" and I'm assuming you meant to write shut. It was funny but I'm letting you know in case you want to fix it.
Mirrors2014 chapter 14 . 5/19/2014
"In my mind I hear melodies pure and unearthly... But I find I can't give them a voice, without you!" I will be honest. The little thoughts in my head that "read" to me could only sing that part. Lol :D
Phantasma'sRose chapter 55 . 2/26/2014
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!
Phantasma'sRose chapter 54 . 2/26/2014
Goddamnit! It's bad luck to see the bride in her gown before the wedding! :)
Phantasma'sRose chapter 47 . 2/26/2014
Ok, if you were in the process of writing this and this is how you left this chapter, i would hunt you down and make you tell me what happens next... But seeing as the whole thing is done i am calm and probably going to be reading this for the next two hours.
Phantasma'sRose chapter 31 . 2/22/2014
Very original diary entry... As a matter of fact it reminds me of a song in a movie that starts with Ani an ends with stasia... Anistasia right.
Phantasma'sRose chapter 25 . 2/22/2014
Yep, i was right. I only see one flaw... HOW THE HELL DO YOU MISS YOUR CYCLE FOR HOW EVER MANY MONTHS AND NOT NOTICE IT?!
Phantasma'sRose chapter 24 . 2/22/2014
Hmmm... Love making vomiting stomach pains ohhh... I may be wrong, but i think someone WAS pregnant...
Phantasma'sRose chapter 21 . 2/22/2014
You freaking scared me!
Phantasma'sRose chapter 11 . 2/22/2014
I noticed most of your diary entries could be GREAT song lyrics...
Phantasma'sRose chapter 10 . 2/22/2014
"I can't help but notice you're a little at war with yourself..." - flynn rider
Phantasma'sRose chapter 4 . 2/21/2014
Damn her? Damn her?! No Erik, damn you!
Phantasma'sRose chapter 3 . 2/21/2014
the one thing i've noticed Erik says to literally everyone is
1. sorry for the mess
-or-
2. sorry for the draft, i'm used to the cold
Phanma chapter 55 . 2/11/2014
I LOVE a happy ending! I enjoyed your story very much. Ballerina? I thought Eudora would have grown to be a piano virtuoso... Also, marrying Dimitri when they grew up as brother and sister? Oh well... still a great story. Thank you!
meatloaf lover chapter 27 . 8/15/2012
...remind me never to eat your meatloaf. Since meatloaf is cooked in the oven, not on the stove. ;)

Also, it's such an American dish...would Christine really recognize it? Especially since it's a "let's save money by stretching out the meat" dish...
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