|Reviews for Acts of Contradiction|
| Guest chapter 18 . 8/5/2014
As one of my friends would say...
You buttnugget ;;
Nah... Jk. Wonderful story... But you seriously messed with my feels NELLIS FEELS
| RobPatzLuvr chapter 18 . 5/30/2014
Ur so mean! I want nick alive!
| The Magnetic Witch chapter 18 . 12/15/2013
I so badly want to believe Nick real that last time, but you made it seem so impossible! D;
THE AGONYYYY! DX
| Nimy chapter 2 . 7/28/2013
I'm feel terrible for Ellis. ;-;
| DA-member.7 chapter 13 . 6/11/2013
OMG! BEST GAY PORN EVER!
| frog-ribbit chapter 2 . 3/4/2013
This is so great, words fail me.
| Crown0017 chapter 18 . 12/2/2012
The last line made it feel like it was all an illusion.. -cry- haha it was a good story I enjoyed it very much
| Inactive00 chapter 18 . 11/14/2012
*Tank-flips a car*
"HE BELIEVED IT. EVERY TIME"? HOW DARE YOU ;-; First you kill Nick right as he reached rescue with Teh Masturbator (Charger). Then you seemingly resurrect him. Then you kill him again, right there with that line. Then you decide it's up to us to decide if any of the last part was real? jfhdfhiusfdhj no.
Know what? The nurse saw him, therefore alive.
Harhar to you. And thank you, by the way, for the story. I don't think it was lacking at all, and I certainly don't feel gypped. If this was what you would consider not "nearly as strong" as you could've written it, it's be crazy to see what you could've done! But I'm extremely satisfied with this story. That you for the fantastic read.
| SoulMore chapter 18 . 9/8/2012
OMG the last line "Ellis believed it. Every time." has my head turning! I started to cry realizing that Nick may never came back. *Sniff*
| darkangel325 chapter 7 . 8/12/2012
Please dont let no one else die D:
| darkangel325 chapter 5 . 8/12/2012
Okay I hope no one else dies because my chest is starting to hurt with all this sadness
| x Pipkin x chapter 18 . 6/30/2012
Just finished reading the entire story. You did a very good job at experimenting with a mentally ailing and emotionally distant Ellis. It's a new approach that in my opinion worked out quite well.
There were some grammatical errors, as well as punctuation errors, but that's nothing to deter from the story itself. Merely a very minor issue.
I did enjoy how you went through the trouble of finding song lyrics to help capture the meaning of each chapter. I found that it helped tie it together. Some parts seemed rushed, but I know how it is trying to fill in the details and yet coming up with nothing. (I'm working on my first story right now, and despite being a One-Shot, it's hard)
I felt sorry for when Rochelle died. She's actually not that useless of an AI when I play. A gory and gruesome death, but at least there was a moment of remembrance. Nice ending, as well. Is Ellis truly mad and continuing his hallucinations, or is Nick living and breathing, coming to restore balance into the mechanic's life? If you ever do revisit this story and add on to it, I do look forward to it.
Some of my favorite moments in the story where when Ellis went temporarily blind (that was fun to read, and imagine), Ellis' freakouts, and the tender moments shared with Nick and Ellis.
I liked the creativity of mimicking the Witch to get past her. If only you could do that in game... xD
Great story, needs some revising, but overall I had a great time reading it (with uber depressing instrumentals going on in the background while I did. xD)
| simplegay me chapter 18 . 4/18/2012
This last actually made me cry, to lose the one you love then after a while coming back so unexpectedly is just tear jerking I love this :')
| simplegay me chapter 11 . 4/18/2012
this is so sweet I love it so far and with 18 chapters it's like i'm reading a novel and I love it sad rochelle had to die but I get where your coming from :) i'm gonna keep reading though _
| Dooomy-Chan chapter 18 . 3/3/2012
i have an account under same name, to lazy to sign in.
you sick bitch, i love you. I cried a lot in this story, an the ending had me bawling. the whole 'decide if Nick was alive or not' got me. i loved every moment of this story. Also i had sad piano play on my ipod, really helped set the emotion. Makes me want to write a Nellis.
I also cant find anything wrong with this story.
now be honest, did Nick live or die to you?