Reviews for Odin's Ghost
fan-to-fiction chapter 1 . 9/26/2010
Alright, I like the concept of Heero seeing Odin's ghost.

But I think Heero wouldn't accept that right away because he has been trained to think analytical and seeing/dealing with ghosts is not in his package of training. So because of that I think Heero is a bit out of character here.

I think (though I could be wrong) that Heero would first wonder if it was just a hallucination, then he would try to explain him seeing Odin. Later on he would accept that, but still freak out a bit (as much as Heero can freak out) every he sees Odin. His friends would know something's wrong, but they wouldn't be able to tell what.

And I'm sorry for rambling, it's still early in the morning.

Again, I like the concept, but I think it's ooc.

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