|Reviews for when moses died|
| Lyreine the Lemon chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
I...I am at a loss for words.
This is a stunning story. Bravo, well fucking done. This is how a REAL Bible fic should be written.
| Holy Cow chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
Now I see why you liked Wabloo Swabloo...
| Jyoti chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
There were some spelling errors in this first chapter and I was kind of confused in the middle of it but other than that it was pretty good, it had some good suspense at the end.
| secret base chapter 3 . 6/17/2011
this is amazing and I'm going to hell now thanks a lot ;_;
| G-gurl chapter 13 . 6/2/2011
Oh wow this is great :D You really should write more!
I am an avid fan! Marry me! *_*
| Idiosy the Crusader chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
I don't really care so much that this is "offensive" but by the fact that you are wasting people's time.I'd rather rule in hell than serve in heaven.
| His Love is Eternal chapter 1 . 5/20/2011
I really do not appreciate this story. Moses was a great man of God, so you should refrain from making fun of him in this manner. It is disrespectful and hateful. You are probably a person who thinks it is okay to be an atheist and mock the Word of The Lord. Well, you are wrong, and I urge you to change your ways before you end up in Hell.
| Atheists RULE chapter 1 . 5/4/2011
I am going to report this story because I have a fat jiggly brazilian butt and I have no better way to express my pain. I haven't had hot carpet sex with my lesbo buddies in a long time! Because my big butt gets in the way!
Cha's Aegis - Critics United come and flame our forum! We are a group of 892 year olds who have no lives.
| Calyn chapter 12 . 5/2/2011
Reported. May the deleting be swift.
| Canan chapter 12 . 5/2/2011
Wooow this is great!
| Brendan Rizzo chapter 9 . 11/11/2010
What? None of this makes sense. What is the deal with Chapter 5? I am so confused...
| YukiKyo chapter 9 . 11/2/2010
| mamzellebutterfly chapter 8 . 10/25/2010
how did you get to be such a good writer
please write more.
| Guest chapter 7 . 10/16/2010
What. Six chapters of exquisite badfic, one chapter of apparently irrelevant but quite nicely written narrative. I would flame you vociferously and report you for violation of the "regard for proper language" rule, but I'm too confused to do any such thing.
| Cosine Wave chapter 1 . 10/11/2010
Lol, your story is freaking hilarious. Please write more!